| "The Art of Losing" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: sapphire1 On: September 15, 2004 13:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i'm not a great fan of Sakura's however this was a lovely and well written story of her feelings -
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Reviewed By: Angie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2004 11:31 CST
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Wow, that was really good! I feel bad for Sakura now. I should get my sister to read this. She hates Sakura. This'll either make her like her a little more... or just laugh at her pain, lol. I also agree with on of the other commenters. It's annoying when they make them go out of character. It really seems like this all could have been happening and was just cut out of the manga/anime. (does that make sense? I don't think I'm making sense...)*sweatdrops*
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Title: thank you
Reviewed By: HardCandy Vegetto On: December 14, 2003 21:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was really nice. Thank you for writing a good story and not crap with the words Naruto in it. Your formatting and grammar are good. The story flows nicely as well. No half assed lemons. Please continue this one or write another. I truely enjoyed reading this.
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Title: The Art of Losing
Reviewed By: Yuki San On: November 12, 2003 11:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
COOL! This is cool! So what was Sasuke and Naruto doing? I mean, if you don't mind telling.. Um.. Could you update soon, PLEASE!? BUH-BYE ^.~
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Title: Yatta!
Reviewed By: Lotus-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2003 17:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was incredible. I can't tell you how much I loved this story. The net is in serious lack of good SasuNaru fiction but this one really makes up for all the other ones I've read. I absolutely loved the analytical point of view as well. It was so easy to see the evidence shown in the real anime brought to light and slowly but surely moved in the direction of shounen ai the way this was written. Usually you tend to see such drastic jumps to yaoi in fics that totally throw reality out the window in favor of throwing these two at each other. Again, I love what you did with this. 'Tis perfection.
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Reviewed By: Toga On: September 28, 2003 13:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh, what a great story. That was wonderful how you wrote so it was like Sakura was talking specifically to the readers, but you didn't make it in a Sakura 1st Person. I like the sort of "implications" to what they were doing, also. Dear me, I also have to congratulate you on the way you wrote a Naruto/Sasuke fic without making Sakura seem like a witch. That's a problem nowadays, because Sakura is really a good-hearted person...she just thinks she's in love with Sasuke (who we all know loves Naruto [insert wink here]). I strongly suggest you write another chapter...or at least another Naruto fanfiction.
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Title: ...Woah
Reviewed By: Yami's Girl710 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2003 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...very deep story. This is very well written and I'm hoping you will write a sequel. Ja!
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Reviewed By: Logana On: September 18, 2003 11:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicley written, original in it's own way, and somehow I can actually see it. Enjoyable to read, and you've written it in an interesting style. Poor Sakura... too much brains, too little sex... Just like Sherlock Holmes! |
Reviewed By: Crying Forever On: September 10, 2003 19:21 CDT
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I love this story! absolutely fabulous! |
