Title: Am I the only one?
Reviewed By: AmyAnderson45 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2003 08:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Am I the only one here that will review your fanfic? It seems like it. Oh, well. I don't have any reviews on mine either but I don't mind. This story would have been great if you could just not tell us everything. I know you feel that we should know it but don't tell us. Don't tell us that this scene or chapter takes places 8 months ago or even 13 years ago. Try using imagery to describe the year, history, events or something and then tell us later on. It's best to keep people guessing sometimes because if you give all the details about one particular thing what's keeping people from stopping at the end of the chapter and saying that's it? Also, have surprises in your story. I know you probably already have something in store but keep the reader or your audience interested long enough to go to the next chapter. I read your fanfiction because I have nothing else to do and plus you wanted someone to review. So, here I am! Don't get me wrong, your story is good but it could be even better. Um...let's see do you have any more fanfictions that you want me to read? If so, e-mail me sometime. Keep practicing and I'm sure you'll improve your writing soon enough:-) |
