Reviewed By: Kristy On: November 11, 2003 19:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fan fic so far i think you should keep adding more to it though. like why is Dalandau always scowling. or even go to the future and talk about when he's grown up. (just some ideas u don't have to use them)but overall so far i like it!
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