| "Goodbyes Aren't Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Kasiree On: December 06, 2003 01:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You use the word "whilst" too much. But who cares? Fic is great!
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Reviewed By: Kemara On: November 12, 2003 19:18 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, wassup. I just finished reading your story and wanted to say i really enjoyed it. I cracked up at the part where ray gets to the airport and mariah sees him with everyone dragging behind him, of course tyson would be stuffing his face! lol. Great job on the story.
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Title: Fantastic!
Reviewed By: Juria [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2003 18:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In case you can't tell, I'm a HUGE Ray/Mariah fan. This is one of those stories I wish would have been turned into an episode. I got a little tear in my eye when it came to the end, just because I'm happy. I think I heard it best in a movie once, Yes! It's about time. No offence, too many Ray/(insert male here) fics. Ray & Mariah, together forever, and ever!
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Reviewed By: xXxBeccaxXx On: October 08, 2003 16:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! that was so good! i loved the bit where they were all dragging eachother along! it would b so kool if u did a chapter where rai asked mariah to marry him and the wedding that would rock, just keep tyson away from the cake!
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Reviewed By: cat_tiger On: September 27, 2003 04:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was beautiful! Write more!
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Reviewed By: Karate Kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2003 00:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG that was such a story. I liked it a lot.
Ciao,
Karate Kitty |
