| "More Than Meet The Eye" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Ravenz2008 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2004 23:48 CDT
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I've really enjoyed reading this fic (the chapters that *are* finished) I want more! It seems like it's been a while since you've updated, but I hope you continue to keep chapters coming! (also I hipe that this ends up being a Shinji/Asuka fic, but I'll respect your desicion) ~Raven
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Reviewed By: Xenostriker On: March 01, 2004 08:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very good! It's always a good point to keep'em guessing. I like this fic very much hope you update soon. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Chaos Damn It [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2004 21:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a realy godd story. I liked it very much. ^_^ I hope you post another chapter soon! - Chaos Damn It
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Reviewed By: Jordan/Wicker Man On: January 24, 2004 20:06 CST
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very good, nice job with shinji standing up for himself, bout damn time he did anyways :P and if you need a pre-reader, i'll do it. email is thewickerman23601@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: Sutsurike Deafu On: January 18, 2004 15:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is good stuff. I love Shinji/Hikari fics (even if this isn't one it looks like it) and this is good stuff. If you still want a prereader I'll do it. Just e-mail me. wxtomas15@hotmail.com ~Suts
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Title: cool!
Reviewed By: victor razador (not logged in) [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2003 17:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's good. im not a big shinji fan but i love hikari (she's the best of the eva girls IMO) and it was nice. i can critique or help on ideas too if u would like.
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Reviewed By: guardian On: October 15, 2003 21:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can you please write more of this fic soon? You did a great job on this!!!
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Reviewed By: Grand_Crusader [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2003 15:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Extremely well written and thought out, presentation flawless. However, when the title said "More than Meets the Eye"....well, I guess being an avid Transformers Fan makes me a little biased. But if you need prereaders, I'd happily volunteer. |
Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: WarpWizard [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2003 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not completely terrible.
The primary problem is that nothing happens *at all* in this chapter, especially nothing WAFFY, so the reader is disinclined to read another chapter, should one come out.
Spelling, grammar and style could all use some serious work.
Low marks for originality, again simply because nothing happened, so there's nothing there to be original.
Post more and hopefully the plot will pick up. |
