| "Sweet Temptation" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: Sweet Temptation
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 15:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: great
Reviewed By: sailor_jupiter22 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 15:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cant wait to read more
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Title: Sweet Temptation
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2006 14:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Sweet Temptation
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 19:20 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 16:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Excellent story. Did Darien grab Rae and call her "sweetheart"?
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Reviewed By: usagibunny325 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 11:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is a great story! I love what you have written so far! Keep it up! and write more soon!
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Title: I Likw Your Story
Reviewed By: A New Hottness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2003 20:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The grammar and spelling is off but the story is still interesting, funny, and a little attention grabbing. Some people need to stop being super mean, some people can't spell or just feelmore confortable writing slang. I undestand the story perfectly and, I feel your pain I can't spell for shit, and some people can't let things slideeeeee. That's wrong and it's mean. Be considerate, jeez. Keep up the good work, JA NE!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: CrystalMaiden87 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2003 23:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I personally Love this story its very outgoing and I havent read a story like this ever I just want to congradualte you and im looking foward to the next chapter :)
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Reviewed By: Medatsu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2003 12:18 CST
Comment/Review:
SWEET!! i also like the sugestion at the end for confusion and lemon!...IM WAITING! * taps foot impaitiantly*
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Title: Ummmm.........people these days are so mean
Reviewed By: Slash_the_donut_eating_freak [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2003 15:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well personally i like it....it has it's flaws but c'mon we're only human.........well u are on my faves list so bye bye hope u update soon. ~Slash~
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Reviewed By: viper0z [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2003 15:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
the reason why your rating is so horrible is because like Crazy-kins said your story sucks and she said it nicely i personaly thing your story sucks ass try to read other really good story's and see how well they are written because as far as i can tell your plot isn't completly horrible but the way you write is to put it simply you can't write for shit
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, let me put it this way... this story sucks. Usually I'm not too harsh, but with this I can't help it. Try not to use so much slang (that really shows that you can't write). Also, learn how to use words in your sentences so that they make more sense. From the person who hates your story, Crazy-kins
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