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 Reviewed By: Kitsune Angel370  On: May 01, 2004 14:53 CDT
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I was looking through your application form and decided to join in. My name is Angel Hallaway and I am sixteen years old. I am a girl. I suppose for race I would be Saiyen or kitsune. I ussually wear black. Anything black. I am around 5'7. I enjoy listening to LOUD music, skate boarding and surfing. I'm not to sure about how I act. I'm ussualy pretty quiet and calm but I can be a little. . . oppinionated at times. I DO NOT like preps or cheer leaders. Some are okay but most just bug me. I also do not like when people ask stupid questions. As for history, do you remember the name of where Bulma lives? East City? West? Well anyways, I suppose my character was orphaned there. I'm not to good at creating histories. You can change it if you like. As far as relationships go, I'd say my character has a thing for Goku. Thank you for reading this. Angel Hallaway
 Reviewed By: Kitsune Angel370  On: May 01, 2004 14:53 CDT
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I was looking through your application form and decided to join in. My name is Angel Hallaway and I am sixteen years old. I am a girl. I suppose for race I would be Saiyen or kitsune. I ussually wear black. Anything black. I am around 5'7. I enjoy listening to LOUD music, skate boarding and surfing. I'm not to sure about how I act. I'm ussualy pretty quiet and calm but I can be a little. . . oppinionated at times. I DO NOT like preps or cheer leaders. Some are okay but most just bug me. I also do not like when people ask stupid questions. As for history, do you remember the name of where Bulma lives? East City? West? Well anyways, I suppose my character was orphaned there. I'm not to good at creating histories. You can change it if you like. As far as relationships go, I'd say my character has a thing for Goku. Thank you for reading this. Angel Hallaway
 Title: HERE'S ONE {we may ask for more later}
Reviewed By: protecters of the H.F.I.L.  On: April 21, 2004 19:38 CDT
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Name:sayia kaolisha Gender: female Age: 19 Race: 3/4's human 1/4 something only she knows. Clothing/Accessories: she wears jeans, a black longsleve shirt, black bukleup boots, a belt and a trenchcoat {oo! oo! guess what color it is! your right! black!} she also has a choker necklace with a black onyx pendent. she says she'll give it to the one she loves. Description: short {like boy short} black hair, lily white skin, chestnut eyes, very thin but well muscled, {has a bunch of scars on her arms and shoulders,hece why she wears longsleves and the trenchcoat} Powers/Abilities/Transformations: ok...she has very sharp eye-sight. she notices almost EVERYTHING. she also has VERY good aim. i mean she a master knife thrower and 11 out of 12 times she hits the target. {she keeps a bunch of knives somewhere in her coat and she always wears a 10 inch long dagger on her hip. her power level is about 78,000 at her lowest. {like she can kick but with normal humans} however if angered or if in a situation where adreilen is pumping thorugh her veins she starts to radiate a black aura. {or she glows black like the super-sayien glow gold} her power level goes up to about 345,000 {don't get upset. i know the super sayeins go over 1,000,000} . also in her lowest form and her highest she has one speical attack called 'kokushibyoukase' or 'black death bonds' in which she shoots long tenacles out of her wrists {and sometime has those spilt in half but that doesn't happen often} and grab her oppent and drain they're energy. then she can either asorb it or toss it into the atmosphere she also has a smaller trick {it's not really an attack i just thought i'd mention it.} where a small ball of energy comes out her hands that can heal wounds. {after both of these 'tricks' she is often worn out and if the kokushibyoukase is cut off {doesn't happen often but if it did} she would automaticlly go uncoious because of the shock to her system} Personality: she's quiet. and withdrawn. but if the humans are in danger she'll go out and fight tooth and nail for them. she's also a writer at heart and you can constently see her writeing poems and the occasioaly short story in a note book she carries in a secret pocket of her coat. History: unknown. though by reading her peotry it's quite obvious she's had a rough life. DBZ Guy/Girl: well :scrathes head: frist i'd like to say she's a lesbian. :blushes: hey i wanted something different. and as for romance....well....i think do you know mai? from dragonball. she was always running around with that fox guy and pilaf? dark hair indigo eyes? sort of cowardly adn got embaressed in 'certain situations' ? i want her to be in love with sayia. if she's not in this fic then my second choice i think erasea {gohan and vidal's freind} would be fine. { but ONLY if mai isn't in this fic} E-mail Address:twstormychic@yahoo.com
 Reviewed By: Nina Angeles [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 05, 2004 23:22 CDT
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name:Kristina Vincent Gender:Female Age:16 Race:1/2 saiyan & 1/2 vampire Clothing/Acceceries: blue bellbottom pants short blue gloves that have no fingers and a baby blue halter top and white tenishoes and a blue jewel in the middle of her forehead. Description: her father, Angelus, was the most terrible vampire to ever walk the earth until gypsies cursed him with a soul and her mother was a saiyan baby, Alcyone, sent to earth. Although she has vampire blood she has no fangs and faints at the site of it. she is helplessly in love with trunks. she's about 5'7 & has long brown hair that stops at her waist & she has blue eyes. she where's two rings that are exactly the same except one is silver on her ring finger and one is gold that goes on her thumb that will some day go to the man she loves. the ring has two hands (friendship}, the hands are around a heart (love), and on top of the heart is a crown(loyalty). Powers: She has a problem learning to fly but she's been getting kinda good at it. she kinda has i dream of jeanie powers and kinda an evil jeanie put fit when she fights. Personality: sometimes shy or quiet. but other times she just cuts loose. and she is a great dancer and thats her favorite thing to do. History: Born in romania but only lived ther until she was 3. then she moved to las Angeles, California in the good ol' U S of A. she constantly fights with her father and half brother Conner. dbgtguy: TRUNKS E-mail: Kooka141@yahoo.com
 Title: Can I be in it too?
Reviewed By: Melli [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 07, 2004 17:13 CST
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Name: Micky (Short for Meclina) Gender:Female Age:171/2 Race: Demonic Angel( Half demon, half angel) Physical Description: Long midnight black hair with sapphire eyes and a light tan. She's 5'5 1/2 to 5'6" Clothing/Accessories: She wears dark (almost black)blue bellbottoms with different color tee shirts. No pink, yellow, green or brown. She doesn't really like those colors. Powers/Transformations: She uses spells but she can fight and use a sword pretty good. When she transforms, she only does this at the greatest emergency because it hurts when she does, since she's half demon half angel she has wings. One wing is an angel wing, white and angelic, the other wing is demon, black and demonic. She can unleash a great and terrible power once in this form. Evil or Good: Good Live or Die: Live Romantic Interest: Trunks or 17 Personality: She's a Taurus born stubborn and proud. She likes to sing, which she's great at, and she likes to have others near her. People are naturally attracted to her bubbly personality, though she has experienced pain, that is all behind her now. She sees the bright side to things, and are always there to help a person in need. She's quite pretty, with a childish air, though she know more than others think. She's a really friendly person but can be a tad selfish at times.
 Title: Um..... Is there still an opening?
Reviewed By: Thomas Hunt  On: January 21, 2004 17:38 CST
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Name:West. no last name. Gender:Male Age:15 Race:Human. Clothing/Accesories:Baggy blue jeans.A white t-shirt. a nice, black courderoy jacket. A silver sword called the Shattered dreams. He sometimes wears some light silver armor. Desription: Blond hair, Grey eyes. Muscles do not show, but he has them anyways. Powers/Abilities/Transformations:Has huge physical strength, weak in ki blasts. If needed, he can sommon swords made of ki. Swordsmaster. Personality: He does not talk, he does not smile unless he is fighting. He also is very kind and he does not like to kill unless he thinks the person is a murderer. He will help people in need, ignores thanks. History: His parents came from a castle that was annihilated by King Piccolo. He was born in a city that was later desroyed by Buu. He then took up the sword and became mute. He meets the others while fighting someone? DBZ Guy/Girl: Give him someone kind as a romance, preferably a girl. E-mail: Legolas7301@aol.com Hey! if you want to know, my name here is Last Knight Thomas
 Title: ................................
Reviewed By: Desire69all4u [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 20, 2004 17:18 CST
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PLease update..I've been waiting for like....forever........:(
 Title: OOHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Desire69all4u [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 11, 2004 17:41 CST
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Name:Yuna Horitaru Gender: Female Age: 17 1/2 Race: Full saiyan Clothing/Accessories: Short blue Jean skirt, White and blue sneakers, red muscle shirt that has a Nike sign, blue jean jacket(open) has tattoo of large Roaring red highlighted tiger on back of jacket, clear lip closs, Rainbow painted nails, a string necklace of a tooth hanging at bottom, two ear holes each side with shark teeth, one pair of blue finger showing cloves and a mood ring on middle finger. Description:Eye: One blue, One Green. Skin: Light tan. Hair color: Brown, Yuna hair style, (Final fantasy X-2)Simply enough, loks like Yuna from Final Fantasy x2 with the cloths from above. Powers/Abilities/Transformations: Can we say she is a reincarnation of Broly? PLEASE@!!!!!!!!!! I really want her to be powerful, but the thing is that she hates her saiyian heritage, because her her saiyin blood killed her parents.When she transforms she has blonde hair with brown highlights.Personality:I like to pick a fight. I am like Bulma, pan, 18 put together. When mentioned about saiyins or her saiyin culture she scolds the person or glares eveily, or just simply walks away from conversation. History:A baby at the time I am adopted into a human family. I was found with a tail a sayiyin tail. And yes, because of the sayin half, like goku I also killed my family. So I'm a outlaw. I never had a good past being alone. I was always an outsider. So constantly to get attention I was how you can say a class clown. When I meet the DBZ gang at the upcoming tournament they sense a eminse power. being me Vegeta checks me out only to find me having a saiyin tal...and so on..DBZ Guy/Girl: Vegeta is interested in me so he constantly bothers me and trys to seduce me. E-mail Address: Chilychica18@aol.com
 Title: the game
Reviewed By: Taci  On: December 27, 2003 13:00 CST
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Name: Sly Gender:female Age:17 Race:Elf Clothing/Accessories: Black pants with blue designs on the bottom a silver belt that has a sword at the side in a black sheath a black shirt with blue designs on the wrist a black cloak and hood with a silver star brooch and black boots that conceal a small dagger Description:She is around 5'5 long black hair her eyes are bright blue cat like her ears are pointed she has pale skin and she is farely thin Powers/Abilities/Transformations: She has the ability to heal any type of wound and can disappear into the shadows within seconds Personality:She is quite and mysterous she has a short temper and hates elf jokes she has a friendly side that she will only let you see if you get past her sheild of no emotions History:She was seperated from her brothers who she loved very much and was banished from her homeland by her father so she wonders around in forest and other desolate places E-mail Address:starrdrg@aol.com
 Title: Heeeere's Jaicen!
Reviewed By: Jaicen [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 08, 2003 11:56 CST
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Name: Jaicen. Gender: Male. Age: 5. Race: Full Saiyan. Clothing/Accessories: Wears a black T-shirt and black leather pants, both reinforced with the same material used for Saiyan armor (provided by Bulma after much chemical analysis of the remains of the armor Vegeta wore on Namek). He has his left ear pierced and is usually seen with a heavy earring in it. Wears no other jewelry. Description: Tall for his age- about 3'6"- and weighs 87 lbs. Heavy build, but fairly thin. Has red hair that goes straight back, red eyes, and a red tail. Powers/Abilities/Transformations: Has several 'standard issue' abilities, like flight, Ki blasts, and charging. Has been able to go Super Saiyan since age 3, and Android 18 thinks he's about halfway to Super Saiyan 2. Unlike most Super Saiyans, his hair turns blue instead of blonde, but it still goes straight up and he still has the greenish eye color. He can hold Super Saiyan form for about 30 minutes without rest or recharging. Favorite attacks are the Kamehameha and an attack he made up called Neutron Ray, which is essentially an upsized, rapid-charge Kamehameha. Personality: A known troublemaker, tends to prank everyone he knows as often as possible. Fairly ruthless in combat, but otherwise has a fairly happy-go-lucky personality... until he gets angry. When he's mad, he has a bad habit of getting into fights for no reason. Not exactly the smartest Saiyan ever, but he's at least smarter than Goku (not saying much there). HATES people he dubs 'bad guys,' like, from description, Freeza, Android 17 and Cell. Also has a strong dislike for anything involving Hercule except beating the hell out of him and his fans. Looks at Android 18 as a mother figure... or so he thinks. Vegeta seems to know better from his description of his feelings (which the Prince insisted on because of the faraway expression on Jaicen's face when he talks about her), though. History: Orphaned on Earth shortly after birth, Jaicen was placed in the care of Krillen and Android 18 and has been trained in martial arts since he could stand- about 10 months old. He was always told that he was not their real child, but he doesn't seem to mind being adopted. He also knows that he's at least part Saiyan, and most of his scholastic studies are under Vegeta, learning about Saiyan culture. Trained early to use a Kamehameha, and shortly afterwards invented the Neutron Ray to capitalize on the Kamehameha's strengths and try to remove the weaknesses. Met Goku and his family recently, and doesn't know what to think of them yet. Has a surprising aptitude for martial arts, even for someone with Saiyan blood. DBZ Guy/Girl: He's a little young at the moment, but, assuming he grows up during the story, Android 18 (surprising, considering his history). E-mail address: svanyildtttsella@hotmail.com
 Title: so...whats going on?
Reviewed By: vegeta'z gurl  On: November 28, 2003 16:01 CST
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so, whats going on, u finnishing or even starting this fic or did I just read the begining fr nothing?
 Reviewed By: heatwave  On: September 22, 2003 21:01 CDT
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you no what you can pair me with lime (you know the girl gohan saved before the cell games she like 18 in the time period now)
 Reviewed By: heatwave  On: September 21, 2003 19:56 CDT
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NAME: Goken GENDER: Male AGE: 18 RACE: saiyan CLOTHING/ACCESSORIES: a light blue gi with a black undershirt, boots and armbands, saiyan armor, or blue jeans and a blue shirt and sneakers. DESCRIPTION: Hair like goten's at the end of DBZ with black eyes, he's 5'9", and he has his tail. POWERS?ABILITIES?TRANSFORMATION: Can go super saiyan almost level two, can fly, and is training with Goku with his ki attacks. PERSONALITY: he is always looking for adventure and a challenge very friendly and smart. HISTORY: His parents were outcast of the planet and left the planet before it was destroyed and moved to another. when his parents died he heard a rumor saying there were saiyens on earth so he went there met Son family and lived with them. attains high school with Gohan. DBZ GUY/GIRL: None EMAIL: esigler@midsouth.rr.com
 Reviewed By: *Crecy  On: September 21, 2003 16:20 CDT
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Name: Crecy Gender: Female Age: 17 Race: Pure saiyan Clothing/Accessories: Is always found in either a gi (Black or dark blue) or dark baggy pants and tight shirts. Description: About 5'4, has red hair, and green eyes. is skinny and has lightly taned skin. Is fairly strong phisically(Stronger then the average human, duh, but not stonger then, say, Goku or Vegeta), but doesn't look it. Bangs frame her face. Powers/Abilities/Transformations: She is a saiyan, and just became Super saiyan while Training with Goku. Can't hold it very long but is training to be better. She turns into the Dark supersaiyan. the only difference between Golden and Dark Super saiyan is that Dark SSJ gain's black hair, eye's and tail andd her Ki feels dark, but not evil.One thing she prides herself in, is her speed. No one has beat her yet, and hopefully won't. Personality: Depends on her mood. Sometimes she'll act goofy to hid her feelings. VERY stuborn and headstrong. Never backs down from a challenge. Luvs to do outragous things and LUVS her music. She'll sing (Good voice) and listen to all the heavy metal and punk rock bands. HATES Yamcha's guts. Likes to be independant and almost ALWAYS gets back after she goes down. Kinda like a mix of Vegeta with some of Goku's traits thrown in. History: Is found by the Son's when she has accidently ran into them while stealing food about a week before the setting. Has no family. Considered a strange girl with a tail. DBZ Guy/Girl: Future Trunks E-mail Address: Cruelty2me@yahoo.com (Please tell me if I got in. Thanks. ^_~)
 Title: My Character
Reviewed By: Reikon  On: September 15, 2003 15:16 CDT
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Name: Reikon Gender: male Age: 16 Race: kitsune (fox demon) Clothing/Accessories: Wears a black sleeveless haori, and a pair of white hakamas, with one golden hoop in his right ear. Description: Reikon has jade eyes, sharp fangs, small claws compared to Inu-Yasha, and pointy elf-like ears. His feet and hands are slightly fuzzy with tan fur. His feet look like fox paws. Powers/Abilities/Transformations: Can use fox sorcery, along with Fox Fire and afew of his own moves. When he transforms to his youkai state, he's a tan fox that's about eight feet high from the shoulder to the ground, and his glowing green eyes. Personality: He's very independant, and does not like it when someone else tries to help. Otherwise, he's a very friendly kitsune. History: He's lived with his father for two years after he was born before moving out of the den. He then discovered an odd well, with a smaller kitsun in it holding a bit of the Shikon Jewel; he lept in, wanting to get it, but instead fell through the well and ended up in the world of Dragonball Z. He's lived alone in the mountains ever since. DBZ Guy/Girl: Doesn't want one at the moment. E-mail Address: MeiOokami@aol.com
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