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| "The Game" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] | Title: is it to late to be in the fic
Reviewed By: demonic_angel_4 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 00:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
NAME: arainami watasumi GENDER: female AGE: 17 RACE: celestial demon / human CLOTHING: black tank top and jean shorts w/ bandages from the elbows down (for fighting) and black converse low tops DESCRIPTION: dark brown hair and eyes hair a bit past her shoulders well tanned skin looks mexican in shape full figure about 5'7 P/A/T: ueses her ki to amplify her attacks and manipulates it to make a variety of energy weapons can teleport skilled martial artist and can has the dragon eye (if u want an explanation send me an e-mail)/ in demon form her hair is down to her knees same color and eyes are saphire w/ slits like a cats instead of pupils fangs and hawk wings with tribal markins over her entire body PERSONALITY: distant because of her past,loyal to those who earn her respect caring and mature she speks often and is wise beyond her years believes in protecting those you care about no matter the cost hates those who only desire power and hurt innocent people and is allergic to mushrooms loves meat HISTORY: was once evil demon from the netherealm (yu yu hakusho) spirit world captured her and sentanced her to live life as a human her human family was murdered and she was raised by a dojo master who passed away he believed in honor and protecting those you love cuz of his death she was reluctant to open up to any one but he molded her into the person she is today (his name kenshi homura) and she always has words of wisdom for those who need them DBZ GUY :trunks ( i LOVE him ) E-MAIL : anime_onna1993yahoo.com
| Reviewed By: SesshomaruInuyashaKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 17:41 CST
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when u guys ever going to update? oh can i please be in it? if mm.org doesn't work for u try animespiral.com
| Title: Fan Fic Character Form
Reviewed By: Big J On: December 12, 2004 05:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name: Jon or Big Jon Gender: Male Age: 17 Race: Human Clothing/Accessories: Black T-shirt, Baggy Black Jeans, Black Leather Trench Coat, Black Leather Boots, Leather Gloves, Wears Black Sunglasses A lot. And as a weapon, he has an Ax Shaped Like THIS Guitar. Description: about 6'5", has long, black hair (heavy metal hair), brown eyes, Ripped Muscles Powers/Abilities/Transformations: Very powerful,for a human (can hold his own against Gohan). Can shred on the Electric Guitar. Weapons Expert. Can fly, sense power, throw ki blasts (the basics). Personality: Doesn't talk much, when he does, it's to prove a point to you, yell at you, defend Heavy Metal when it's being abused verbally, or have a short conversation. Jon is usually always serious and is kinda a short fuse (like Vegeta). He loves Heavy Metal music and doesn't tolerate people putting it down. You get his Respect, he watches your back. Hard to make friends with. He does have a lot of respect for Vegeta and will always watch his back. He kind of wants a friendship with Vegeta but doesn't want to lose trust with him. History: Jon has a very gloomy past. He grew up alone and homeless. Was found and was put up for adoption, but he was a troublemaker and was never adopted. When he was old enough to be on his own, he left the Orfanarium and found a crummy job and a crappy apartment in West City. During those years he discovered Heavy Metal music and has been hooked ever since. Eventually he had grown a fancy to weapons and st | Title: Can I still be in your story?
Reviewed By: SesshomaruInuyashaKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 19:16 CDT
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can i please be in your story? Please? (gives puppyface)
| Title: Can I still be in your story?
Reviewed By: SesshomaruInuyashaKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 14:06 CDT
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Name: Meg Gender: female Age: 17 Race: half-Saiyan Clothing/Accessories: Tight teal green blouse with khaki colored mini skirt and heels or slippers. A white t-shirt that says "Sports" with blue sweats and a blue windbreaker. She has pierced ears on each ear. Usually wears studs, but will wear hops and other types. She also sometimes likes to wear a flower printed short kimono, to remind her of her heritage. She also has a locket of her mother and father that she wears everyday. Description: She's 5'8, has long wavy blonde hair to the shoulders, and baby blue eyes. She then changes her hair and puts in black streaks, grows it to her waist, and gets light purple contacts. She is also has a very tanned body. Powers/Abilities/Transformations: She can transform into a Super Sayian, she can fly, shoot fire blasts out of hands (like most of the DBZ fighters), telepathy, telekinesis, levitate, and control others' energy blasts Personality: Very sweet, nice, kind hearted, outgoing, outspoken, strong willed, naïve at sometimes, always loves a new challenge, and never gives up on something History: Her parents were killed by a mob and then she fled to Capsule Corps to get away from them. Bulma took her in willingly while she was still raising Trunks. Vegeta didn't accept her as his equal until she began to show improvements in her sparing with Goku and Mikazuki. She also helped Bulma with her creation at Capsule Corps and Bulla with her shopping and boys DBZ Guy/Girl: Trunks, Gote | Title: my bio
Reviewed By: blubear [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2004 15:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NAME:Lexy or lucina GENDER:female RACE:half kitsune,half saiyan AGE:18 Clothing:i have three outfits a chinese dress,red,with slits up the sides with an egale in front, a pair of jeans and a tshirt and a pair of baggy pants with the same chinese top only white(ray's outfit on bayblade)i bring it ina book bag type bag Abilitys:Fire,I canot control my powers completly so i harness them throgh my staff (just a wooden stick but made out of the strongest tree)and the thick metal braclets on my wrists control them so they dont go out of control(even though ive had training there still hard to control)i only get super streght from my saiyan part i can not transform into any SSJ because i have not had any training i have trained in wepons and i can heal Persoality:im kind sarcastic clumsy but graseful in battle im not jugdemental im very loyal i like to train, battle and dont trust easily History:before the saiyan planet was destroyed my fater put me in one of the pods and sent me to my mothers planet Bartoth here i trained with fire kitsunes that knew my mother i was teased and bullied, i stil trained until i found out the there were saiyans on planet earth so on my eighteen B-day i went to earth in hope to learn about my history and train my other half DBZguy:Goku Extras:i like to have my hair in french braids when i train i also have a tatto on the small of my back of a rose on fire with vines E-mail:Zexylexy13@aol.com i tryed to email you but it wouldnt let me singed,LR
| Title: May i be in your story?
Reviewed By: Straygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 03:49 CDT
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Name: Angie or angel Gender:female Age:14 race: human with gifts (il tell u in a minute clothing/accesories: school girl uniform in blue and white and a ruby gem stuck on the rest (ill explane later) looks: Dark brown eyes and hair hair is up to my weist 5'6" 120 lbs a bit chubby my bangs are always slicked to the side while my hair is always in either a brade or bun powers/abilities/Tranformation: remember that gem that was stuck on my wrist it gives me elemental powers earth, wind,fire, water,light,dark,lightning, ice if ever a last resort i make that gem into a bow and i the elements are all in an arrow and its my final and only attack personality: im quite shy and quiet but once you get to know me im really talkative and open i like being with my friends and make sure they have a good time i would lie if i have to to not hurt any ones feeling im a real gamefreak. i love hamburgers. I dislike jerks that take advantage of me and others i dislike criminals History: i'm trunks sister and i look up to him in every way im basically always around him and i care for him as well as the gang and his family or my family so to speak when i went to church this preast witch was a very close friend gave me a "red ruby" jewel only to have it stuck to my wrist he explaned its to protect humanity like your brother and father and friends. Dbz guy girl: Android #17 please let me know if im exepted by emailing me at XxGothicWingsxX@hotmail.com
| Title: ohh!! can i be in it, and could you also update soon. plz?
Reviewed By: Kurama Fangirl 4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 20:41 CDT
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can i be in here? Name: Kitsumi Meimoto Gender:girl Age:11 Race:half sayin half fox demon Clothing/accessories:black tank top with blood red rose on it, and light blue bootcut jeans. carrys a dark denim(jeans materail, i cant spell ^^;) back pack with food and spare clothes.also has sunglasses that she rarely wears. Discripstion:light blonde hair and dark blue/green eyes. is a bit tan and has claws. has blue fox ears and a tail. Powers/abilitys: basic sayain powers, can go as high as SS and is training. then her kitsune side has plant based wepons, such as rose whip, death tree, ext. when she is just trying to use one side she'll transform into that side. kitsune side her eyes change into amber and her hair turns silver. Sayian is pretty much the sam eonly she loses the ears and tail and her hair turns with blonde. Personality: normaly happy but when you get her mad you should run. if pmsy, you really should stay away other than that youre ok. doesnt get mad that easy. History:her parents died when she was 7 the she got raised by her brother( 15 at the time e-mail me if you want his bio too) who is good friends with Gohan. her brother has a diffrent dad so hes all kitsune. Paired with:Goten( hence the age ^^;) ahe has a crush on him. if you need anything else just e-mail me, k? Email: SakuraK@comcast.net
| Reviewed By: Kitsune Angel370 On: May 01, 2004 14:53 CDT
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I was looking through your application form and decided to join in. My name is Angel Hallaway and I am sixteen years old. I am a girl. I suppose for race I would be Saiyen or kitsune. I ussually wear black. Anything black. I am around 5'7. I enjoy listening to LOUD music, skate boarding and surfing. I'm not to sure about how I act. I'm ussualy pretty quiet and calm but I can be a little. . . oppinionated at times. I DO NOT like preps or cheer leaders. Some are okay but most just bug me. I also do not like when people ask stupid questions. As for history, do you remember the name of where Bulma lives? East City? West? Well anyways, I suppose my character was orphaned there. I'm not to good at creating histories. You can change it if you like. As far as relationships go, I'd say my character has a thing for Goku. Thank you for reading this. Angel Hallaway
| Reviewed By: Kitsune Angel370 On: May 01, 2004 14:53 CDT
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I was looking through your application form and decided to join in. My name is Angel Hallaway and I am sixteen years old. I am a girl. I suppose for race I would be Saiyen or kitsune. I ussually wear black. Anything black. I am around 5'7. I enjoy listening to LOUD music, skate boarding and surfing. I'm not to sure about how I act. I'm ussualy pretty quiet and calm but I can be a little. . . oppinionated at times. I DO NOT like preps or cheer leaders. Some are okay but most just bug me. I also do not like when people ask stupid questions. As for history, do you remember the name of where Bulma lives? East City? West? Well anyways, I suppose my character was orphaned there. I'm not to good at creating histories. You can change it if you like. As far as relationships go, I'd say my character has a thing for Goku. Thank you for reading this. Angel Hallaway
| Title: HERE'S ONE {we may ask for more later}
Reviewed By: protecters of the H.F.I.L. On: April 21, 2004 19:38 CDT
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Name:sayia kaolisha Gender: female Age: 19 Race: 3/4's human 1/4 something only she knows. Clothing/Accessories: she wears jeans, a black longsleve shirt, black bukleup boots, a belt and a trenchcoat {oo! oo! guess what color it is! your right! black!} she also has a choker necklace with a black onyx pendent. she says she'll give it to the one she loves. Description: short {like boy short} black hair, lily white skin, chestnut eyes, very thin but well muscled, {has a bunch of scars on her arms and shoulders,hece why she wears longsleves and the trenchcoat} Powers/Abilities/Transformations: ok...she has very sharp eye-sight. she notices almost EVERYTHING. she also has VERY good aim. i mean she a master knife thrower and 11 out of 12 times she hits the target. {she keeps a bunch of knives somewhere in her coat and she always wears a 10 inch long dagger on her hip. her power level is about 78,000 at her lowest. {like she can kick but with normal humans} however if angered or if in a situation where adreilen is pumping thorugh her veins she starts to radiate a black aura. {or she glows black like the super-sayien glow gold} her power level goes up to about 345,000 {don't get upset. i know the super sayeins go over 1,000,000} . also in her lowest form and her highest she has one speical attack called 'kokushibyoukase' or 'black death bonds' in which she shoots long tenacles out of her wrists {and sometime has those spilt in half but that doesn't happen often} and grab her oppent and drain they're energy. then she can either asorb it or toss it into the atmosphere she also has a smaller trick {it's not really an attack i just thought i'd mention it.} where a small ball of energy comes out her hands that can heal wounds. {after both of these 'tricks' she is often worn out and if the kokushibyoukase is cut off {doesn't happen often but if it did} she would automaticlly go uncoious because of the shock to her system} Personality: she's quiet. and withdrawn. but if the humans are in danger she'll go out and fight tooth and nail for them. she's also a writer at heart and you can constently see her writeing poems and the occasioaly short story in a note book she carries in a secret pocket of her coat. History: unknown. though by reading her peotry it's quite obvious she's had a rough life. DBZ Guy/Girl: well :scrathes head: frist i'd like to say she's a lesbian. :blushes: hey i wanted something different. and as for romance....well....i think do you know mai? from dragonball. she was always running around with that fox guy and pilaf? dark hair indigo eyes? sort of cowardly adn got embaressed in 'certain situations' ? i want her to be in love with sayia. if she's not in this fic then my second choice i think erasea {gohan and vidal's freind} would be fine. { but ONLY if mai isn't in this fic} E-mail Address:twstormychic@yahoo.com
| Reviewed By: Nina Angeles [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 23:22 CDT
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name:Kristina Vincent Gender:Female Age:16 Race:1/2 saiyan & 1/2 vampire Clothing/Acceceries: blue bellbottom pants short blue gloves that have no fingers and a baby blue halter top and white tenishoes and a blue jewel in the middle of her forehead. Description: her father, Angelus, was the most terrible vampire to ever walk the earth until gypsies cursed him with a soul and her mother was a saiyan baby, Alcyone, sent to earth. Although she has vampire blood she has no fangs and faints at the site of it. she is helplessly in love with trunks. she's about 5'7 & has long brown hair that stops at her waist & she has blue eyes. she where's two rings that are exactly the same except one is silver on her ring finger and one is gold that goes on her thumb that will some day go to the man she loves. the ring has two hands (friendship}, the hands are around a heart (love), and on top of the heart is a crown(loyalty). Powers: She has a problem learning to fly but she's been getting kinda good at it. she kinda has i dream of jeanie powers and kinda an evil jeanie put fit when she fights. Personality: sometimes shy or quiet. but other times she just cuts loose. and she is a great dancer and thats her favorite thing to do. History: Born in romania but only lived ther until she was 3. then she moved to las Angeles, California in the good ol' U S of A. she constantly fights with her father and half brother Conner. dbgtguy: TRUNKS E-mail: Kooka141@yahoo.com
| Title: Can I be in it too?
Reviewed By: Melli [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 17:13 CST
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Name: Micky (Short for Meclina) Gender:Female Age:171/2 Race: Demonic Angel( Half demon, half angel) Physical Description: Long midnight black hair with sapphire eyes and a light tan. She's 5'5 1/2 to 5'6" Clothing/Accessories: She wears dark (almost black)blue bellbottoms with different color tee shirts. No pink, yellow, green or brown. She doesn't really like those colors. Powers/Transformations: She uses spells but she can fight and use a sword pretty good. When she transforms, she only does this at the greatest emergency because it hurts when she does, since she's half demon half angel she has wings. One wing is an angel wing, white and angelic, the other wing is demon, black and demonic. She can unleash a great and terrible power once in this form. Evil or Good: Good Live or Die: Live Romantic Interest: Trunks or 17 Personality: She's a Taurus born stubborn and proud. She likes to sing, which she's great at, and she likes to have others near her. People are naturally attracted to her bubbly personality, though she has experienced pain, that is all behind her now. She sees the bright side to things, and are always there to help a person in need. She's quite pretty, with a childish air, though she know more than others think. She's a really friendly person but can be a tad selfish at times.
| Title: Um..... Is there still an opening?
Reviewed By: Thomas Hunt On: January 21, 2004 17:38 CST
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Name:West. no last name. Gender:Male Age:15 Race:Human. Clothing/Accesories:Baggy blue jeans.A white t-shirt. a nice, black courderoy jacket. A silver sword called the Shattered dreams. He sometimes wears some light silver armor. Desription: Blond hair, Grey eyes. Muscles do not show, but he has them anyways. Powers/Abilities/Transformations:Has huge physical strength, weak in ki blasts. If needed, he can sommon swords made of ki. Swordsmaster. Personality: He does not talk, he does not smile unless he is fighting. He also is very kind and he does not like to kill unless he thinks the person is a murderer. He will help people in need, ignores thanks. History: His parents came from a castle that was annihilated by King Piccolo. He was born in a city that was later desroyed by Buu. He then took up the sword and became mute. He meets the others while fighting someone? DBZ Guy/Girl: Give him someone kind as a romance, preferably a girl. E-mail: Legolas7301@aol.com Hey! if you want to know, my name here is Last Knight Thomas
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Reviewed By: Desire69all4u [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2004 17:18 CST
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PLease update..I've been waiting for like....forever........:(
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