| "Being of Sound Mind and Body" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: your really good!!
Reviewed By: REDICULOUSLY_GOODLOOKING On: December 13, 2003 09:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heyy great fanfic HONESTLY but my bad as a fan hehe i just didnt read it to the end...probably no matter how good you can write about nappa i just cant stand his character .. laugh out loud soree but its really good...hey have you ever been flamed ... well if YOU HAVE IGNORE THEM BECAUSE I KNOW YOUR FANCICS ARE REALLY GOOD JUST by reading this one haha so keep it up... 0_*... 0_0...0~o...
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Reviewed By: Silver Queen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2003 06:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice! The ending was a really nice touch with all the 'going to hell' stuff. I do imagine that the trio, Nappa, Raditz and Vegeta, would probably rather go to hell and be with the others. This really made me think about Nappa and how he's a really neglected character.
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Title: one of the best fics i've read in a long time
Reviewed By: ssjchrissa (not signed in) On: October 21, 2003 06:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm still wiping the tears. I guess it's true what they, "heaven or hell is what you make of it" there were moments when you had me laughing and crying as i still am now. i had no idea it was Piccolo reading the sarka. (did i spell that right?) I thought it might have been Trunks for a few minutes. Nappa's view of "life" in Frieza's service was just so deep and maddening. man, if only they had escaped with the other guy. i truly feel that Frieza was the most evil of all the Villans. of course, those jerks (the human z-senshi) just proved how evil comes in many forms.
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Reviewed By: PeUtiFuL JaNe On: October 17, 2003 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey man *** tears cumming down *** u are such a great writer .... u no i always liked nappa he is kewl huh?? but n e wayz back to ur fan fic it is sooooooooo creative and i luv it ..... i wish that vegeta was a bit nicer to nappa huh ?? well better just congratulate u on ur writing skillz and tell yah to keep it up ... LUV ALWAYZ JANE
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2003 04:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapter again - but sadly the DB refs were lost on me - I have AWFUL quality fansubs of that series - the sort that give you a migrane after 5 mins of trying to make out what's happening on the screen... :( I loved the way you took us from laughter - the idea of Nappa writing about 'Dream Fairies' was inspired!! - through the intrigue of Frieza's 'recruiting policy', the excitement of the tournament to Nappas hollow dread of what Vegeta may become. Excellent writing as always, and can I say Thanks for being such a good conciencious updater and never keping us waiting too long?? :D
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl (Sick to death of trying to login) [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 11:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh - that last line... *tears up* Please!!! Stop making me feel sympathy for Nappa!!! Good chapter - I like dark... :D The Priest was a nice touch, but you have a lot of nice touches in this fic, they're what make it stand out.
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Reviewed By: yamin0kage [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2003 11:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whow. This story is so imaginative and original. It's such a pleasure to read. You're right... I never would've thought that nappa would've had to have been intelligent to stay with the prince all this time. Funny, the things that don't occur to people, huh? cheers!
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2003 03:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yup, bought the explanation of Nappa's stupidity, totally. I can't believe how well you have captured a completely unknown, unexplored side of Nappa and yet made it seem so him. It's very obvious that you've put a lot of thought into this story, and your work is certainly paying off. I must admit, I only clicked on this fic out of curiosity, My God, someone's written a story about Nappa!! I'm very glad I did, because what you've given us is one of the best, most touching fics that I've read in a long time... Thank you!! I only hope that a lot more people realise this soon, and you get the hits and reviews this so richly deserves.
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2003 06:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, I didn't want to admit it in my last review, but you HAVE changed my view of Nappa, and I don't like it!! It's scary and disturbing!! But, joking aside, I agree with your opinion on why people don't like Nappa - look at Vegeta and Radditz, dreadful people, murderous savages, but, they're pretty so they get away with it!
Funnily enough, I was composing my review in my head as I was reading this chapter, and I was going to mention that you were changing my view of Nappa. You've captured a whole new side to him, but made it seem totally believable - I can honestly see him in his pod scribbling down thoe exact words you have used.
O.o Looks like it's my turn to be long winded!
PS Thanks for the comments on my fics... :D
PPS Please update soon - I'm getting rather fond of the bald bugger!! |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2003 16:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Damn, this is good! It's refreshingly original, and it makes a nice change to see something about Nappa. I personally can't stand the man, yet I was disappointed when I came to the end of the fic, and desperately hoping that you would have updated by the time I had finished the last chapter!
I look forward to your next update.
I REALLY like the way you portray Bardock too... :D |
Reviewed By: cha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2003 16:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nappa is not my favourite DBZ character by a long shot, but this fic is very good. You have written a well thought out possible insight into Nappas life before his demise at Vegeta's hands on Earth. Great work. |
