| "Kagome's Reflection" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Hentai-sensei On: December 13, 2004 09:16 CST
Comment/Review:
Pretty good, but what happened to the foreplay? It was kinda cold just to make them to hop into bed without warming up firs. And the next time you should describe more the surroundings and try to slow a bit your pace. There is no hurry to anywhere, take your time and check your writing and try to improve it as much as possible. (Of course it's easy for me to say when I'm not writing myself) The most important thing is that you're pleased with your wrighting. I see lots of potential so keep the good work up ;)
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Reviewed By: S-S (not logged in) On: November 18, 2004 03:22 CST
Comment/Review:
Great story! I could see Inuyasha's innocent face when he said, "Y-You want me to t-take you, kagome?" Hahaha! Priceless!
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Reviewed By: anime fan On: September 30, 2004 14:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
is kagome pregnant?! what does touga do?! jeesh! this shouldn't be a one-shot!! :( it's a good plot line.
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Reviewed By: Relix On: December 16, 2003 19:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice.
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Title: Kagome4061
Reviewed By: Kagome4061 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2003 20:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It think kagome and inu yasha are a perfect pair for eachother .Obviously you do too.I would love to read more of your story's anytime.you rock on writing about kagome and inuyasha in bed
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Reviewed By: Sango1115 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 01:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was good but I would've liked it better if it was longer. A sequel would be good. I would like to know if Kagome is really pregnant. |
