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| "The Face Behind the Mask" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Matu On: April 08, 2004 20:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi there!!! Sorry to tell you but your story seemed like without a plot. Everything happens very abruptely so you can't be too much concentrate or you don't get trapped with the story. Y ou know, previous actions or ocasions are needed, and you didn't include them you just said what had happened and all seemed to become from the nothing, that's why I didn't enjoyed it too much. But this is my pointy of view as a story, i'm not a japenese comics fan but if you are a person like me who doesn't know anything about them, the story is, truthfully, kind of boring. I don't want to discourage you, itt's just to help you next time you write a stary. Take it like an advise not as a criticism.
| Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2003 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
I would never think to writing a love story on two GF's.Interesting.
| Reviewed By: Razoru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2003 15:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
I don't know if this is supposed to be funny, but in a way, it is... Heheh... |
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