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Title: Ch. 8
Reviewed By: Blkwidow77 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 18:53 CDT
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I just love to follow along this story. But man was I aggrivated that Koenma interruppted Kuwabara's present opening. I REALLY wanted to see what he got DAMN IT! How could you do that to me? It just isn't right! Shame on you! *continues to rant and rave at you for another hour* And yes, that's right, You'd better not take so damn long to update this time! It's like you're waiting for the end of the world or something!?! RAHH!! Get writing onna!!! *whips out Hiei's Katana that I stole* *runs like mad when Hiei then appears, looking pissed*
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Title: LMAO!!
Reviewed By: Blazing Neko (not logged on) [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 16:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was hilarious! I can actually see myself doing something like that! Laughing like a mad man is always so much fun... Can't wait to see there second date! XD
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Title: XD
Reviewed By: Blazing Neko (not logged on) On: September 18, 2004 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
.... You said "Oh la, la!" For some reason I bursted out into lafter when I read that! ^_^;
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Blazing Neko (not logged on) On: September 18, 2004 15:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a wonderful first chapter! I just keeps me guessing what might happen in the next chapter! You have great skill as a writter, and that's saying something if *I* complement you. Don't mean to sound conceded but I'm VERY picky when it comes to Yaoi and only review the best storys I read, which is hardly ever, so keep up the great work!
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Title: ch.8
Reviewed By: Jojo107@aol.com On: September 16, 2004 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I swear Kurama can be so stupid at times....*whines* But there aren't anymore chapters for me to read!!!!!...Hm...I wonder what the case is...I aslo wanna know what Kuwabara got for his birthday...Hm...*ponders about it*...Anyway, keep up the Great work.You have loyal fans behind ya 100% percent of the way....Well, probably more than 100%, but I don't feel like trying to figure the math out. Good job.(:
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Title: ch.7
Reviewed By: Jojo107@aol.com On: September 16, 2004 21:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm supposed to be doing my homework....GREAT STORY!!!! I was all...giidy-like when I read the part when Yusuke and Kurama kissed.POOR HIEI!!!!! ...And I actually somewhat feel sorry for Yusuke too....One of them is going to get their heart broken. I have sympathy for that person....Who knows, maybe in the end it'll be Hiei and Yusuke...We'll, actually you know the ending, but hey, it's always fun to imagine.....My mind is just like Yusuke's, it's weird...It's just like Kurama's witty and intelligent..And just like Hiei's dark, cold, mean, violent, yet soft, caring, and protective...Or as my friends say-'You need a mind first!!!'.....But again I say GREAT STORY!!!!!!!!!
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Title: ch.6
Reviewed By: Jojo107@aol.com On: September 16, 2004 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dang this story is addicting...But this chapter was hilarious!!!!!...Don't worry about the party not being in this chapter. Your story rocks. Keep up the good work.
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Title: ch5
Reviewed By: Jojo107@aol.com On: September 16, 2004 20:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WoW...*is speechless* I say, you are a real Kurama-like one...Don't ask... But GREAT JOB!!!! And don't worry about these "Ghost Readers", there just too stuck up or are off in there own little world to care. Whatever you do, don't end this story. It's one of my favorites, and people don't happen to just wander onto my list. ^.~
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Title: ch4
Reviewed By: Jojo107@aol.com On: September 16, 2004 20:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...And to think, I almost ate a tuna salad for lunch today.....Anyway, good story, keep up the good work and never get discouraged....but still, poor Yusuke, I know how the whole crashing into someone then getting sick thing goes....Never want to experience it again either.... Great job. ;)
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Title: ch.3
Reviewed By: Jojo107@aol.com On: September 16, 2004 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*LMAS*...can't...breath.*gasp*...Too much laughing!!!!!.....*falls out of chair*.....Great-Story-so *gasp* far!!!!!......*starts to calm down*....Well, you can tell that they had a good time......Yusuke's not THAT much of a weird eater...I've actually eaten some of the foods he said...Like the corn ceral and orange juice, in fact, I had that for breakfast this morning.^-^ Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: KitsuneLover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2004 20:05 CDT
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This chapter has been the best by far for sure. I can not wait for the next and hope it is even better! Please hurry!
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Title: chapter 2
Reviewed By: Jojo107@aol.com On: September 16, 2004 20:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have me. Hook, line, and sinker. I love the way this is playing out...I actually hear Yusuke telling the story. Somewhat like were good ol' child hood friends, talking about our lives and what's been happening in them since we've last seen each other. It's like he's right here * puts an arm around an invisable Yusuke's shoulder*...scary ,eh?
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Reviewed By: Jojo107@aol.com On: September 16, 2004 19:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*grins* Great beginning. It's got me intrigued. And when my curiousity peaks, I do drastic measures to settle my curiousity down. Therefore, I'll keep on reading your story. ^_^ Keep up the good work.
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Title: Ch. 7
Reviewed By: Blkwidow77 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2004 19:35 CDT
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*sigh* What a great chapter! ^_^ I really enjoyed reading it. I really have no time to read chapters anymore but I make time for yours! Trust me, that's saying something! My only comment would be that I wish you had developed the party scene more. Although I like what you wrote, I really didn't feel the passage of time. I think you need more detail perhaps? That's my biggest thing with your story, especially when it comes to some of the scenes I particularly enjoy, like the 'kissing scene' *gets all giddy and giggles* he he he.... loved it. I definitely feel bad for both Hiei and Yuusuke. One is gonna have to lose and they're both hurting. It's a beautiful torture... *sighs again* And my deepest apologies for the many 'Ghost Readers' you have. Those who read and are too damn rude to give you a few moments of their time back. But know this, I AM reading and I APPRECIATE your work. Please keep updating.
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Title: Ch. 6
Reviewed By: Blkwidow77 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 19:17 CDT
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Well well well missy! You finally updated! *wags her finger at you* Do you know how long I have been waiting?? SHEESH! It's about time! Anyways... It was funny. A little side tracked from the story but interesting none the less. So I LIKEY! Keep going!
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