| "Meskhenet" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 23:35 CDT
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What a well done story. I'm glad you had Seto stay so he could reclaim some happiness. I liked the final scene where the young Seto finally finishes putting his heart back together. Is that in the manga or the unedited Yugioh anime?
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Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 22:30 CDT
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Another excellant chapter. Loved the description of Yami as a porcupine haired midget very funny. Had me shedding some tears when Seto was killed but you brought him back. Will they meet the Pharoh sometime soon?
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Reviewed By: cair On: May 10, 2004 10:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is absolutely wonderful!!!
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Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 07:59 CDT
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Another wonderful chapter! The scene between Set and Seto was great. The flashbacks merging season 0 and season 1 were an excellant way to show how much Seto has grown into a better person. Mokuba coming to Seto's rescue while in the Shadow Realm was perfect. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 12:46 CST
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As usual very interesting. The footnotes are very informative. I loved the way you incorporate the cards with egyptian mythology i.e.; the cards representing a part of a persons soul. That was very good. Set's favorite toy being a wooden horse could have been footnoted since Seto is sometimes translated into wooden horse or seahorse in the Hong Kong subtitled Yugioh dvd's. Seto's reaction to the mural bearing Mokuba's likness and his willingness to exchange Obilesk for his locket was tear-jerking. Can't wait for another chapter!
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Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 22:12 CST
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Enjoyed the latest chapter. It was sad when Seto lost his locket with Mokuba's pic. Can't wait to see what Seth has in store for Seto and the others.
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Reviewed By: mistress_of_ra [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 17:26 CST
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I like the story and is your name Karen? Cause my real name is Karen.
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Title: Sakabatou
Reviewed By: Sakabatou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2003 22:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I can say this, it is even better than "At the End of the Day." It goes back to the theme of Mokuba dying, and Seto having to deal with his loss. Seto is my personal favorite character, so you can see why I would like and recommend this story. I also liked the characters placed in Egypt, the mother and daughter, whom I would name but I don't want to misspell. I think I will hate seeing Seto return to Jap Pan, (he he), and I wish the Torque lost its powers so Seto was trapped in Egypt (Khemet?) forever. That is, until he faces and defeats Set, and reclaims his title as No. 1 duelist (even if it is 5000 years earlier.) If he could be the hero, instead of Yami, it could change the whole storyline and plot of Yu-Gi-Oh! opening up new possibilities, and a new series altogether. Anyway, thanks for showing us Kaiba's light side, and please continue. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2003 11:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I'm so glad you wrote a sequel to At The End of The Day. That was such a sad and well done story. It just begged to have a sequel done.The footnotes a very informative and the characters are wonderful. Can't wait for more!
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Title: Jadejj
Reviewed By: Jadejj [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please con, the fic I wish to know what happens to Seto and why is Mokuba dead???
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