| "Unhappy Aniversary." Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: meera [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 13:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pls don't take it down!!! this is such a great fic! it has so much promise!
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Reviewed By: Inu-kun On: November 04, 2003 10:50 CST
Comment/Review:
poor koibito ..lol.its ok we all forget.i did too.
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Reviewed By: Morlana [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2003 17:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sniffle that was so SAD. I cried and I can relate. You did a good job!
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Reviewed By: kf6fzx On: October 29, 2003 02:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story, it sounds believable for the characters. I would like to see her explain to her parents what he is doing there, and to her friends her sudden change in her mood. One thing dose puzzle me. In CH 1, you wrote that it had been a whole year since she has seen him. In the next chapter you wrote, it had only been a month. Which is it?
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Reviewed By: meera [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniffle* fine i'll wait till the fourth chapter:'( just remember that you rated this as a "g" fic...
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Reviewed By: meera [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 14:54 CST
Comment/Review:
o yeah, and NO ONE SHOULD BE KILLED! except for kikyo... she's an exception:)
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Reviewed By: meera [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 14:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniffle* happy beginnings... notice i i wrote BEGINNINGS and not ENDINGS:P pls, you have to add the "gang" into this fic, and no lemons! that just ruins the mood of it all.
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Title: asap
Reviewed By: adamm On: October 28, 2003 10:32 CST
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i think u should write this as a story and have some lemony goodness,inu and kag get to gather,and have shippo and the others in the story(all but kikyo).this is a good story i like it.
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Reviewed By: Star Katt [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 11:24 CDT
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Inu & Kag shud get 2gether. Lemon if u want. Make it interesting. Don't kill either 1. If there's going 2 b a lemon don't put Shippo n there. I really think this si=ounds good. Make it longer, I don't care if u make it a trilogy, just make it longer so that I kno whats going on.
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Reviewed By: meera [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2003 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
those golden eyes just have to be inu yasha!!! plsplsplsplspls!!!!! they should be together!!! now WRITE
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Title: unhappy anniversary
Reviewed By: bwell gotta On: October 04, 2003 16:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
COME ONNNNNNNNNNNN!That was SOOOOO good!You just gotta write another one to it!!Come on Come on Come onnnnnnnnn!!just think of your fans!wellgotta go!bye! P.S.Dont forget about what I said!!
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