| "the commercial" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Title: persecution
Reviewed By: sacrificeofblood [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 08:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
well it was okay... especially chapter 2 *cackle* but really you should've edited it first. what with all the spelling and grammatical errors you could have asked someone to edit it for you. it was great! although the events were presented quite too rapidly. so... anyway... good luck writing your next fic! ^_^ |
Title: persecution
Reviewed By: sacrificeofblood [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 08:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
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well it was okay... especially chapter 2 *cackle* but really you should've edited it first. what with all the spelling and grammatical errors you could have asked someone to edit it for you. it was great! although the events were presented quite too rapidly. so... anyway... good luck writing your next fic! ^_^ |
