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| "A Lost Soul" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Kagome-chan2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 15:21 CDT
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Oh My God!!! This story is soooooooooo well written and has very good Dialect!!! I can believe "CONSTANCE" Thought different!!! It actually made me cry for some reason!!!! i dont exactly know why but i guess The thought of loosing someone tat you truly love is heart breaking and if you have been through it then you should know what im talking about!!! overall, i loved the story and cant wait to read what other stories you come up with!!! Anyways, Have fun writing!!! I, looking forward to it !!!!
| Reviewed By: Constance [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 03:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
i'm sorry, i need some dilect in this story. i mean, i know u have plenty of it, but without knowing who is saying the stuff, or atleast to whom, i'm going to be completely lost(i am alread lost) in this story.
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