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"Shards of Chaos" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ]
 Reviewed By: Budiamond  On: October 20, 2004 01:38 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow! I loved your story. >>; And I have absolutely no freaking idea why you don't have more reviews. It has to be... like... one of the best Slayrs fanfics I've read. Ever~~ *Scratches her head* I even liked the original characters~ Wow, that's new. I hate original characters a lot of the time, because they don't fit well. I loved Martina's son though and Naga's daughter is hillarious too. It made me laugh when I realised she had fake boobs. Oh, and I love the Xelloss. Your Xelloss is the shiznab. He needs more lines~~ I personally want Xelloss/Filia stuff, but ignore me, I'm a lowly reviewer~~ XD I hope you continue~~
 Reviewed By: harmonious jade [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 11, 2004 13:09 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
While your structure, grammar and spelling could be a bit better, I found the story to be extremely enjoyable. I'd love to see you finish this storyline. You've created some wonderful characters. I can see where you have probably hit a road block with the plot, but I think you could easily finish it. And I really hope that you think about doing so!
 Reviewed By: libele [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 29, 2004 11:27 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
a very good story and awfuly creativ, if i might say. i'l hope that you keap wrighting it tought.
 Reviewed By: libele [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 29, 2004 11:20 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
a very good story and awfuly creativ, if i might say. i'l hope that you keap wrighting it tought.
 Reviewed By: libele [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 29, 2004 11:19 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
a very good story and awfuly creativ, if i might say. i'l hope that you keap wrightint it tought.
 Reviewed By: Hime-sama [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 12, 2004 06:24 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying your story. For one thing, I do believe your narration is in tune with the Slayers series as you go from drama to slapstick humor so easily. Also, the characters are IN character which is something I love to see. The story itself is interesting, and I would love to read more as you publish more chapters.
 Reviewed By: tbiris [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 29, 2003 20:32 CST
Comment/Review:
hmmm, why you posted ch. 27 here and not on your website is beyond me, but it was really good, although I thought Arasi died.
 Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 04, 2003 11:07 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I just noticed you posted this fic on MM. I hope that means you'll continue writing it! I found this fic on Lina's Corner ages ago and loved it, it's very well written and exciting, and your characters are very appealing. I hope you update soon (the fic's been added to my favourites to make sure I take more than 10 days to notice this time).

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