| "Hiei" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Matsuko On: November 26, 2003 14:24 CST
Comment/Review:
You go a little too fast. Slow the story down a bit. Otherwise it is an interestiong 'paragraph.' I look foward to reading more of your work.
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Reviewed By: Jonez On: October 02, 2003 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaaawwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!! This was SO kawaii!!!! Please, do one one of Hiei's POV, 'cuz I think that they are such a cute couple!!!!
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Reviewed By: Yami Yue On: September 26, 2003 22:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was great! I love the way you described Hiei. Hope you're planning on writing more.
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2003 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was a sweet little story! You gonna continue with Hiei's POV?? ^_~
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Reviewed By: LOVER-OF-HIEI [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2003 18:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD BEAUTIFUL! I LOVE I LOVE I LOVE I LOVE!!!!!!!! That was better than my first attempt at HieiXKurama... Mine was like 'they kissed'... HORRIBLE ME! YOURS WAS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVED IT I REALLY DID!!!!!! Please r/r my fics ^_^ lol GREAT STORY PLEASE WRITE MORE! ******Otaku~Hoshi
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