| "Potholes in Tokyo" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: al On: January 25, 2004 22:17 CST
Comment/Review:
yay! rice in tokyo! or bubbles!
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Title: mooooooore!
Reviewed By: i are deep_dementia On: January 19, 2004 01:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fiona:i must must must have a single i am soooo glad you wrote another chapter i thought that it might be the end of this great story forever and i was sad and stuff but you came up on author alert and i was all happy-happy and i gotta take a breath now *pants* yami fiona: your sooooo embarassing!
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 18:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Reem: WHO LIVES IN A PINEAPPLE UNDER THE SEA? SPONGEBOB SQUARE PANTS! yAy! That was funny! My preciassssss! Remasi: write about Bakura-kun and Ryou-chans wedding! Reem: *running around chasing chips that are floating around * BWHAHAHAHAHA Remasi: O_o o_O we gota go... GREAT STORY! Reem: Ra i was craking up during this story! BAkura was soooo funny! O man please right more stoys! bubbles in Tokyo? Rice in Tokyo? ITS RAINING RICE! Remasi *drags Reem away *
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Reviewed By: al On: January 17, 2004 22:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i didn't realize that it was a proposal until he asked and i didn't get why seto fainted!
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Reviewed By: Mandy D. On: December 25, 2003 20:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was hilarious. Poor Kaiba. Horray for Bakura and Ryou. Great fic.
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Title: I LOVED IT!!!
Reviewed By: Arctic_Fox (I am too logged in! LIARS!!!) On: November 20, 2003 18:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAAAAAAAAAI!! That was an awesome fic!! You should update more!!! UPDATE!! I wanna see the wedding!!!! ^_^ If you don't, it's okay... Great fic!
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Reviewed By: Koishii No Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 22:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was so friggin funny! I love Bakura in this fic! He's so hilarious in this fic! Especially around Ryou ^^''. Yugi is so damn kawaii in this fic too! ^^. He was so cute in the first chapter. Well, actually, he was cute in all the chapters. Yami sounds so cute and hot in this fic too ^^. This is great so far! Please update soon and keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 18:50 CST
Comment/Review:
That's easily one of the most hilarious things i've ever read! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: mistress_of_ra [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2003 17:52 CST
Comment/Review:
Is this yaoi cause I'm against boy and boy coupling.
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Reviewed By: Arctic_Fox [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAAAAAAAAAAI!! ^__~ HILARIOUS CHAPPIES!! Oh, poor Baku-chan! UPDATE SOON, OR THE DUST BUNNIES SHALL GET YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOU!! X~X
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Reviewed By: Chibi Neko On: October 08, 2003 18:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hahahahahahhaahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I think I messed up on some of the haha's up there...Oh well! Hee! I was cracking up when I read this!! Ha ha! I especially like Bakura! Crazy Cook Bakura!! ...O Ra I made him sound like a Barbie doll. Speaking of which, lets stuff Anzu into a big plastic and cardboard box and seal it up and watch her suffocate! Muahaha Muahahahaha! ...O.O I didn't choke that time. Wow! Nyan! >^.^<
Chibi Neko!
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Title: AHAHAHAHAH!
Reviewed By: redconvoy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2003 18:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was cute! I didn't expect this story to be funny! I love Bakura acting like a mental patient. Poor Ryou! The purple dino scene was classic. I can't believe it took Anzu to scare the Barney impersonator off.
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Reviewed By: Arctic_Fox [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2003 17:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wasn't there... another chapter??? O.O
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Reviewed By: Star Girl11 On: October 04, 2003 13:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Though I have a question why is Chapter 2 kind of posted twice (once in the first, a second on its own). Anyway update soon
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Reviewed By: Arctic_Fox (Who is to lazy to sign in right now) On: October 03, 2003 17:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! ^__^ AWESOME!! UPDATE SOOOON!!
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