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| "For Such a Time As This" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 > » ] | Title: Smiles and Salutes one more time
Reviewed By: Aditu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2003 14:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, Wingson, while I was so happy to see an update at the same time I am also sad that this fic is over with. It has been a absolute joy to read. All the previous compliments from all my other reviews hold true to this one, characterization wonderfuly done, mind-trapping me in riveted pleasure as I read instead of things I'm suppose to be doing, lol, and everything else I have said before. If my actual opinion counts ;) I cannot be more pleased with how you ended this fic. I especially applaud you on Kikyo's letter, overall actually I think you did excellently with portraying her in your writing. You have a wonderful talent, don't ever let it go to waste. Your imagination and skill is something to be proud of and encouraged. I hope to read further Inuyasha fanfics by you, I will be keeping an eye out! And of course will read and review them as well, lol. Thank you for all the kind things you said in your reviewer responses, the last one especially made me smile, that was very kind of you. Hope to see more of your talented writing soon. Best Wishes
| Reviewed By: Vesca [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 23:35 CST
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what a cool ending! and here I thought you would leave them kagomeless. But this works.
| Reviewed By: MommyRogers [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 11:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it! Technically well written, and with a twist I haven't come across before. I do think though, that it calls for an epilogue . . . ^_^
| Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 11:03 CST
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Yay! A perfect end to a great story! ^-^
| Reviewed By: meera [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 10:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoa... i must have taken you a long time to come up with THAT plan... u had me tearing up! *sob* i don't want the story to end....
| Reviewed By: Vesca [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 19:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow.. this was a real nice one, well thought out and with quite the original concept. I really did like it. SO Brava to you.
| Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 14:53 CST
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Wahahahaha Kagome's gonna come back!! YAY!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 14:11 CST
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TOO COOL!!! ^-^
| Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 13:49 CST
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Cool story! It's so original! The description is GREAT!
| Title: bowing with the highest respect
Reviewed By: Aditu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 08:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wingson, that was absolutely brillant! While it was hard to wait for this chapter I'm glad that you waited till you were satisfied before posting it. I can't think of anything about it I didn't like, you did an excellent job in keeping Kikyo in character and how you wrote it all out was so very believable. I'm almost sad to hear that there is only one more chapter left as I have really enjoyed reading your story, sort of like how I can't wait to see what happens at the end of Inuyasha, but at the same time dread that there won't be more new ones (btw rumor has it that the last episode will be 150, noooooo.....)Anyway, I commend you on this last chapter, it was well done indeed and I'm impressed with how you pulled it off. Saluting again, most excellent author of fanfic. Take a deep breath and pat yourself on the back ;) you did good! (and I'm glad that you are an Inu/Kag fan, so am I) Will be looking forward to the next, and sadly last, chapter of this fic. Once again thanks so much for sharing your talent with us. From this "kind and gentle reader" Best Wishes ;)
| Reviewed By: meera [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2003 19:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it started out confusing... but i read it over more carfully and it was AMAZING... you have to write more!
| Reviewed By: Aditu On: November 03, 2003 11:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
alright....I'm about to give up, I cannot think of any words to describe the latest chapter other than ones I have already used in previous reviews, lol. It was wonderfully written, the surprises you create keep me on edge, I actually cringed when Kagome switched bodies with Kikyo (ewwww, lol) and in the end I don't know whether to salute you again or try to strangle you through the computer (guess I would have to pretend that though) for leaving it in another frickin' cliffhanger! But since I'm a quiet, gentle person I will just salute and sigh as I wait for the next chapter. Though you did say that this would be the one you forewarned as the Kikyo chapter, you have my sympathy, while I do not hate Kikyo but more like pity her in a slightly irritated, distant way, she is a hard character to work with. Good luck, though I'm sure that you will have (or perhaps had by now) little trouble writing it as you have plenty of talent to pull it off. You know I was thinking... you say that you will need mental help after writing the Kikyo chapter...but perhaps your last chapter should have Kagome getting some therapy after all the mental/time twists you've been putting her through ;)j/k lol. Talk about stress! Anyway, I enjoyed the update, and I will be patiently (ha ha) waiting for the next. Maybe us fans can get together and foot the medical bill for the trauma you will/have experience from writing the next chapter. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Keep up the wonderful writing and Best Wishes!
| Reviewed By: Aditu On: October 29, 2003 08:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
enjoyed this latest update! As always another wonderful chapter you have given us. It's nice to know that one can always depend on authors such as yourself to put out another excellent chapter. A little twist now with Kagome, didn't see that coming, lol, but even though you remarked that you might have written yourself into a corner I don't think you have really. I'm sure that you will (or already have) use Kagome's apparent demise somehow. Isn't that the fun with fanfic, or writing altogether? That since it's all your creation you can make it turn out however you want, it's just a matter of making it believable of sorts to the reader, to write out what you want to happen so that the reader will later smack his/herself and think, I should have thought of that..that makes sense! lol. Anyway, great job, as always, I salute you once again. Oh, and don't worry, you're loyal fans won't kill you ;) ....well as long as you don't let this fanfic go unended that is, lol. Best Wishes
| Reviewed By: Black Rose Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2003 19:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've rated you very high on my overall, because, 1.I've never come across this story plot before.Due to there being so many IY fics out these days,it is really rather hard to come up with something relatively un-used, yes?Bonus points for not confusing me when you change scenes and transitions! 2.I just HAVE to give you props for the story!It is VERY involving, and will certainly have a place on my favorites list! 3.I can't find very many grammar/spelling mistakes.The veritble fountain of them in most fanfics is amazing, and a real turn-off to me-the walking dictionary.(inside joke-don't ask unless you want a long story behind an entire school of uptight-jocks and preps who don't know their ass from applesauce) Anyhow, please, please, please! Keep this going and update ASAP! This story is awesome! Regards, ~`BRL`~ (black rose lady)
| Title: Loyal Fan Salutes Author
Reviewed By: Aditu On: October 20, 2003 11:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent, another update! You know, I'm going to run out of descriptions on how wonderful this fic is, lol. I'm really enjoying it, every chapter gives just enough info while still keeping it mysterious...I don't know whether to be happy or irritated with being impatient to know what's going to happen next ;) You're still doing an excellent job with using your talent to write mind trapping chapters, keeping me glued to my computer chair when I should be doing other things, lol. In reply to your reviewers response...should I prepare a padded cell for you when you finish writing Kikyo's POV ;) lol. I don't envy you that task, but I can see that it would be a good addition to the story. I'm sure that you will do a good job. I am thinking that perhaps I should start taking notes so I won't miss any of your hints, lol, but more likely will just re-read from the beginning, that's more fun. Well, glad that someone else reviewed here, didn't want to be the only fan on this site for you. Keep up the great work and patiently (yeah right) waiting for the next chapter. Best Wishes
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