| "Magic locket" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Kikyouko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More great work from you! I LOVE your stories. Please update soon. I really enjoy the story so far...
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Reviewed By: kiki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 21:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story can't wait for the next instalment
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Reviewed By: god_of_all_wolfs [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 07:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok to begin with its a great idea but..not to be mean but most people dont like mixs. it just too jumpy you know..
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Reviewed By: ESM On: January 25, 2004 14:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked your story very much because it was so interesting and creative. You need to work on your spelling though. HJalf that time I didn't kmow what ppl were saying and your scentences are in complete. You also tend to leave out words that are plausable for the sentence to make sence. Please work on it. I enjoyed your story!!! Write more chapters soon
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Reviewed By: 2-2 On: December 29, 2003 22:06 CST
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I like but need grammer.
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Reviewed By: Crimson Regret [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2003 18:04 CST
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I like the idea you have here but i would suggest you check your spelling of words. Otherwise, it's all good. ^-^
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Reviewed By: Angie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 00:09 CST
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I like the story! I think an editor or something might help, but it's still a cool idea. I hope you continue to write. It's always a shame to see a good story left unfinished.
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Reviewed By: Angie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 00:01 CST
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I've only read the first chapter so far, but I like it. I'm sorry it took so long for me to start reading your fic. I just kept forgeting. I have the memory-span of a stump.^_^'
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Reviewed By: Usagi Princess (Author of Princess Serenity) On: November 14, 2003 19:58 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well the story is good, but I think you should check it before you post and add a bit more detail to the story other then that it was good, Um let me know when you update and if you would like some one to read the chapter before you post I would do. Usagi. Usagimamorsama@netscape.com (This is not spelled wrong it is correct.)
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Reviewed By: Sakuracheary On: October 27, 2003 13:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that ws a cool fan-fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
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Reviewed By: Dragon_Shaddow [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2003 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello! I like your idea, but you need to run it through the spell-check sometimes....Have you tried getting someone to be your editor, or do you have some kind of one on your computer? Anyway, it's a good fic! It could use a litte polishing, but you're on your way. I Reviewed your fic.....can you please do me a tiny favor and take a look at mine? Thanks!^_^
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Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 17:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well it's a little hard to follow by because of the spelling but I like it so far its pretty good. OK, heh just want you to finish it because one should never give up on a story.
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