| "PenPen in Love?" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Kurama'sFanGirl24 On: November 24, 2004 22:40 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I knew Asuka would take over the world one day!!!Anyways I almost choked on the Hi-C I was drinking!
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Title: WTF!?
Reviewed By: Chaos Damn It [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2004 20:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This Fic Reaches In To The Little Corner Of The Brain That Everyone Has. The Little Corner Where You Put All The Retarded Things You've Ever Thought Of, Filing Them Away Because They Were Too Damn Retarded, And Leaves You Wishing That You Had Put Them Down On Paper As You Have. This Story Is One Of Funniest EVA Fics I've Ever Read. Theres Obviously Some Weird Shit Going On In Your Head, So I Have 2 Things To Tell You: 1) I'm Glad To See That I'm Not Alone (With The Weird Shit That Is) 2) Keep It Up. It Was VERY FUNNY! - Chaos Damn It
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Reviewed By: AnonymousBlarg On: October 17, 2003 23:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are very creative, and definately original, but I find you simply do not put enough effort into structuring your story. I understand it is meant to basically be a humor fic, but you throw things in so quickly that your readers don't even have any time to realize how ludicrous it all is. Try taking a bit more time and being a bit more careful with how you write the story, and it could be very good indeed.
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Title: LLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: RJ On: October 05, 2003 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL LLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! No offense but it seems you have wwwwwwwwwwwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy too much time on your hands!!!!
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