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Title: ...Incredible...
Reviewed By: Serenity91 On: April 12, 2004 16:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...That was an incredible fanfiction...I wanna marry it! (Hehehehe!! Sorry! I couldn't resist!!) Seriously, that fic was amazing. You are an incredible writer!! Keep going!!!
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Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: October 27, 2003 00:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ Loved it! Really really loved it to death! ^.^ SO great! Can't wait for the sequel!!! =D You do some great OC's and Yuugi being sad and even kawaii fluff. Soooo more soon please! Arigato! Jaaa!
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Reviewed By: chibi_hikari On: October 25, 2003 22:46 CDT
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*angry growl* no you did not just take so long to update and then leave it at a cliffie. You ARE truely evil. I hope you're planning on updating soon, or you can kiss this fan good-bye (*begging on knees* please oh please update soon, pleasssssse)
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Reviewed By: myshi On: October 25, 2003 12:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such an excellent fic!
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Reviewed By: dark_light18b On: October 24, 2003 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i love this chapter hope you update soon.
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Title: B
Reviewed By: RainOwl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2003 07:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! Like I said in the title, I vote for option B!^-^ >purplepurplepurplepurple
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Title: I agree with ya!
Reviewed By: Midori_Verde On: October 21, 2003 15:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree with u skippy, i pick a tho, lol....anyway u should just end it soon...i fell that if u keep going,then the story is going to start lacking...u dont want to over do what yami and yugi is gonna go through and all, so my vote is wit skippy 100%!!!
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Reviewed By: chibi_hikari On: October 20, 2003 21:06 CDT
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a, b, a, b, a, b,uhhhhh, decisions, choices, brain cramp. X ( Ok, maybe you should do.........A. but B is fine as well. ok, ok, ok- make up my mind: A. I vote A. ^_^ yeah I did it. I expressed my own opinion. I decided something for my self. Celebrate. *does victory dance(cabbage patch)* Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: KK On: October 18, 2003 00:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
I chose B!!! ^^ i like it so far^^
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Reviewed By: Sango Taijiya On: October 17, 2003 22:51 CDT
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great fic, keep it up! o, yea, i vote for B)! update soon
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Reviewed By: niner On: October 17, 2003 21:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
I go for option (B) but if you get stuck on that you can work on (C) do them both!!! hehehehe what can I say? I'm gready.
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Reviewed By: Nakhti_Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2003 02:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet fic! First I thought it'd be like others, yet it blew me away at how much it isn't. I enjoyed it very much! ^_^ Crystal
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Reviewed By: Saiyan_Kitsune_Foxfire [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2003 01:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow that was great. I vote on way B. Please update soon. ~SKF
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Reviewed By: "Skippy" On: October 15, 2003 22:19 CDT
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End it as planned. I don't know what your other reviewers have in mind, but I think that 20-25 chapters is more than enough for a story. You don't have to make it longer if you don't want to. It's your story, not theirs, not mine. I've turned down suggestions a few times because they seemed unnecessary to me. I let you in on something that I learned in my Theatre class in college. Your story has already reached the climax. Once that happens, then you have to bring it smoothly to an end. As they say all things good or bad must come to an end.
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Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 21:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
B AND C!!!!!!!! What an excellent fanfic... It's just... excellent...
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