Title: Callie1075
Reviewed By: Callie1075 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The writing style could've been more descriptive, and stuff in between the asterisks could've been more grammatically correct. (E.g., *Grandpa Moto is here also!* instead of *grandpa moto is here also* [I think that's what you put... but anyway, that's just an example.]) However, the originality... TURTLES! ^_^ DA TURTLES! DA TURTLES! DA TURTLES! And KAIBA-BASHING! I love it!!!! ^_^ It's awesome!! BTW, if you're bored, then please R+R my fic!! It's kind of like this... a Spin the Bottle fic. Cya!
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