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Title: update this story?
Reviewed By: sliders245 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2009 20:38 CST
Comment/Review:
good chapter and please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Moshi Moshi Neko On: July 28, 2004 14:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Waii~ Thi fiction is so many things, it's almost un able to describ it! It has mystery, thrills, angst and romance! So perfect ^^
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Reviewed By: Angela On: July 07, 2004 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it...please continue quickly with updating and etc. I have a few suggestions... 1. Bring Mokuba into this and have him be Seth's weak spot and have him tell Yugi all of Seth's plans. 2. Bakura seems abusive to Ryou who only listens to Bakura...could you possibly make Ryou braver and not take all the yelling that Bakura seemed to do earlier in the series? 3. Azizi is sooo cute! I was thinking of him inheriting both Yami and Yugi's powers and being all-powerful and junk like that. That's a side-story idea... That's basically it. i really liked this and hope you continue...fast...as in NOW!!! Write dang you! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Darkness Shadow of Bloddy Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2004 20:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um...its not so corny just too repeative.
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Title: hey!
Reviewed By: Joey'z Sk8tergurl On: November 28, 2003 12:25 CST
Comment/Review:
Okay, i'm officaly worried! You haven't updated fo a while. *Watery puppy eyes* Have you quit writing this one? I hope not! *Cries so much floods her room* Plz update!
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Reviewed By: yahsa On: November 01, 2003 22:06 CST
Comment/Review:
i almost for got can u explane what azizi looks like cuz i have been wondering thanks in advance
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Reviewed By: yahsa On: November 01, 2003 22:01 CST
Comment/Review:
i love this fic it is to cute ^^ plz continue ^_~
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Reviewed By: Sango Taijiya On: October 31, 2003 20:17 CST
Comment/Review:
If you ask my Seth needs to unstick his head from his a$$! and azizi is soo cute! that is great you brought in bakura and Marik, they are a part of egypt. keep writing and update soon!
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Reviewed By: Nitehawk angel demon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2003 05:42 CST
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Hey, you and disney did a pretty good job there. Not bad. I really liked it. Interesting idea bringing the other four here to Egypt. Well. anyway, i hope you update soon, plz.
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Reviewed By: shadow_demon18b On: October 24, 2003 21:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
thanks for ading me in.Godd chapter the unly thing you need to do is get read of seth and it will be perfect.oh is it youst just me or is every one pity seto just a tinny bit i now he was pretty much a first class bastard but maybe you could show the guy some mercy( he just loved yugi ho could blame him).
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Reviewed By: just a fan On: October 24, 2003 15:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
hi. um I enjoyed this story a lot. I enjoy all your stories. I was wondering if you were gonna ever continue Play With Me, one of your stories (but I'm sure you knew that) I'm asking you on here because I wasn't sure if you stilled checked that stories reviews. Oh well, I just hope you will, but if you don't you have to do me a favor and update this story quickly, K? ^_^, k.
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Reviewed By: Blush On: October 24, 2003 15:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hiya! it's me and I know you are just overjoyed by that fact. I know that I am the sun in your sky, the highlight of your day, the frosting on your cake (need I go on) ^_^. That was so great. I know Yami is so happy that baby is finally getting enough brains to fill that big head of his (we're going to assume his head is rather large). And I have one thing to say for Seth: HAHA, THAT'S WHAT YOU GET LOSER :D. *real mature, huh?!?* Please continue. Ja Ne ^_^.
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Reviewed By: Joey'z Sk8tergurl On: October 22, 2003 22:47 CDT
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Dude, Seth is one evil mother... Seto: Shut ur mouth! me: ^_^* Um....yeah. So anyway, I'm starting to wonder, is Jou in this one at all? It's like he dissapeared after the 20th chappie in Fight for the Hakari Cherub. Oh, a singing Yami plushie with a Yugi plushies that laughs when u hug it to go with it! ^_^ Plz hurry updating!
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Reviewed By: Kyran On: October 19, 2003 19:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really love this series, I read the first part a long time ago and then I couldn't remember the title and I couldn't find for so long. I'm really happy I did find it and the sequels, they're so awesome and I'm totally hooked on them. I can't wait to see what happens between Seth and Yugi, and I'm really curious as to why Azizi seems to hate Yami. It's really nice to see a writer put a great deal of time and effort into making a story really worthwhile, and you are clearly one such writer. Keep up the excellent work, I can't wait to read more. Kyran.
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Reviewed By: shadow_demon18b On: October 18, 2003 00:27 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love story,but i dont like that baby maybe if someting happend and the baby like yami it mite be diferent ;HINT ;HINT; HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON !
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