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| "The thing that hurts the most" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Yaoi Neko On: July 19, 2005 11:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was extremely touched by your fic (wrings out soaking wet handkerchief). Pooooor Sanji, *sniffles* Beautiful piece of creative writing. I'd love to read more of your work...but just let me finish crying my eyes out first...*begins to weep* Not many things can reduce me to tears, so bravo!
| Reviewed By: Uozumi On: May 25, 2005 21:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave it all tens. It was beauitful and I liked how you did Luffy's voice. It was perfect for him five years later and such. I'm going to guess that it's Sanji that he's talking to and the fact that it's never stated adds something to the fic even if it leaves me in curiosity. You make me want to write a One Piece fic. Not like yours, of course, but you have shown me something that I can look towards, that I can shoot for. Your writing was awesome and the uniqueness even moreso. I enjoyed this muchly. ~ Uozumi
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