Reviewed By: A New Hottness [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2003 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't understand the story after the part when Samuel died. It was to short, and it didn't flow well. I think this story was meant for Sailor Moon characters. Unless you alter it a little.But other than that it it's an ok story. If you change a few things and make it longer then it would be much better.Oh and since I read and reviewd your story you can read and review my story. Love's Destiny, thanks KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!
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