| "Stalking the Elusive" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Drof Tceferp [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 14:38 CDT
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^^ So funny. You know, I don't really like the pairings, but you do it so wonderfully, it's awesome....^^ Anyway, update soon, 'kay?
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Reviewed By: Evil theater On: April 10, 2005 18:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good and interesting. please update, i'm really hooked to your story!
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Title: HALOWING4
Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 23:01 CST
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Very funny especially the dried pasta female reproductive system and Yami's inner dialog.
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 15:03 CST
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this is too good. Just what I need with being sick a good laugh on Yami`s behalf. I do like Yami, but this is soo good. Yami can`t keep his eyes to himself.
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Reviewed By: Cairyn Sandstrom [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 06:10 CST
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I love it! I can't wait to read what happens next, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: can't wait On: September 25, 2004 20:34 CDT
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I can't wait till' this fic gets updated!! Its sssooooooo good!! Its better than good, its great!
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Reviewed By: Seto_YamiMyLovers [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 23:32 CST
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*Pouts* You didn't even update in a somewhat roughly 2 to 3 months? *Blinks* Well,i guess im just being a hyprocrite as i have a one chapter up so far in my other YGO! fics.,and i haven't updated in about 1 to 2 months now...so,gotta update, I bid thee farwell, ~Harika Huynh
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Reviewed By: Seto-Lover #? On: February 13, 2004 14:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! I love your story! The perspective you have; the creativity...not to mention the absolutely wonderful descriptions of Seto Kaiba! I know it's been a couple months since you last updated, but please, finish the story! I'm begging you! *down on knees* PLEASE!!! =)
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Reviewed By: Sypherus [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2003 21:34 CST
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Although it was short, I enjoyed it. Hehe.. Joey, you "dawg" you. Yami contemplates on some pretty important stuff... like what would've happened if he didn't have a body to start with? hmm... good question. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kurama no Miko2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2003 17:27 CDT
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Oooooooooh your fic features the insanely rare (but personal fav) Ryou x Yuugi (or is it Yuugi x Ryou?) pairing! Either way, I luv those two together but hardly anyone writes for them! So cute! Could we please have some Y/R fluff? Please? ~ Kurama no Miko2003
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Reviewed By: Sypherus [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2003 01:58 CDT
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HAHA!!! I loved this chap! I wish my teachers were as energetic as Mr. Kookeenookee... I laughed so hard when Yami got a little too into the "setting goals" speech. It was so great.. if I was drinking something I would've either spit it out or choked on it. Anywho.. plz Continue!!! ... We will be HEROES!
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Reviewed By: Sypherus [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2003 01:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There were a few grammar problems.. but you used a variety of vocab and kept me interested the whole time! This fic is original in the way you write it and put down the details and plot... I laughed at the part where Yami tripped and fell into Seto. The whole look on Seto's face.. haha! On to the next chap!
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Reviewed By: purplechaos04 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2003 09:49 CDT
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Shibby! I agree with the other reviewer, it's def. hard to write a story in journal form, but you did great! Lol, I really loved how Jou and Bakura held hands, that was cute. I loved the gym class stuff too. The humor bits in this were great, like the "Goals are the marshmallows in life." ROFL, I love yr story. btw, Malik's "yami" never actually lived in anciet egypt, as far as i know, he stemmed from Malik's anger; it's some psychological disorder or something
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Reviewed By: cerridwen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 19:17 CDT
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WOW! This is so funny! Two very different sides of Yami- his philosophical one at night and his random hurry and boredom during the day. But it makes everything so much funnier! Look forward to the next update! Great job!
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Reviewed By: sapphire 1 On: October 09, 2003 02:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i never thought that a story could be so intresting from a journal style of writing - hope for more soon
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