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| "The Heart Behind Blue Eyes" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: Seto_YamiMyLovers [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 22:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In a quiet sorrow filled voice,"Do you know what...?"Sighting deeply,running hands in slightly wet hair,"I had flinched so much at reading the section of dear Seto-koi cutting his wrists..."Looking out the window in dismay with sad hazel eyes,"I never like to see blood...dripple from someone as dear to me as Seto..."Eyes shining with tears,"Your story...",looks down with a small smile playing on lips,"...brought such feelings as anguish...depression...and sympathy...".Slowly looking up to author,and smiling sadly,"...it surprised me at how these feelings exposed themselves throughout my emotionless exterior...and," Looking outside still with a smile on her lip,but this time it was a tone of happiness,"...i'm happy...",looks at author with a bright smile this time,"...Because of you fic.!".Eyes sparkle happily and with a cheerful tone with a hint of hope in eyes,"Please continue...please?" I bid thee farewell, ~Harika Huynh
| Reviewed By: Seto-lover #? On: February 06, 2004 12:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that your story is a wonderful idea; so far, it's been excellent! More, please!!! =)
| Reviewed By: Tamlin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2004 21:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this one a lot. I even added it to my favorites! Please keep it up, I can't wait to see what is going to happen. I love Yami/Seto pairings and I love how you are handling their memories, especially the flash backs. Keep it up, you're doing great!
| Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2003 00:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story so far. You did a good job describing Seto's despair over not always being perfect. Your characterization of Seto is excellant. Looking forward to future updates.
| Reviewed By: kiriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2003 14:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is awsome pls write more!!!!
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