| "Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Vegeta'zgurl On: December 18, 2003 17:45 CST
Comment/Review:
MAKE MORE!! and post ur story on fanfiction.net aswell, then more people can read it
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Title: Hmmm...
Reviewed By: Frabjousgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2003 19:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
I've never seen a fic like this before...I like it. I suggest you make the chapters longer and split the text up into paragraphs. It will make it look neater...otherwise interesting. Keep going... ~Frabs! :)
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Reviewed By: knivesbellalona On: October 08, 2003 19:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, this is interesting. I've never seen anything like this before--- and all the characters -are- in character, so don't worry 'bout it. When's the next chap. comin' out?
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Reviewed By: mach On: October 08, 2003 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, this is interesting. I've never seen anything like this before--- and all the characters -are- in character, so don't worry 'bout it. When's the next chap. comin' out?
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Reviewed By: Majin Kade [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 15:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is a really good fic so far, please continue? I'd love to read more.
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