| "White Trick, Black Joker" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: out_foxed On: November 24, 2004 07:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved how your fic started out and I'm hoping you will continuw writing. There are very few decent s-cry-ed fics out there and your has a lot of pontential. Can't wait for an update.
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Reviewed By: Kat Rhye Lee Dezaraye [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, this is a really good fic so far! I like how you're building up to the plot as well, especially at the end. Please continue this!
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Reviewed By: Nema On: December 03, 2003 18:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far, an interesting story. Looking forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: Eloy Brightdreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Another s-CRY-ed fic, and it looks to be a good one. You've got a lot of things started here, and I can't wait to see where you take them! (Don't worry, I never give all 10's on reviews...) I feel so sorry for Kanami... having to watch Kazuma and Ryuhou go through all that. One itty-bitty nitpick... Kazuma's eyes were brown/amber, not green... and Ryuhou's were red, not blue. Yeah, I'm an obsessed fan. ^_^;;
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