|"One Fine Summer Day" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ]|
| Reviewed By: the tigris On: March 03, 2004 16:35 CST|
KAWAIIIIIIIII! that's all I can say, yes I know... see ya ~*~the tigris
| Reviewed By: Egyptian_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2003 18:51 CST|
oh wow this is special...i hope u continue maybe even adda lemon!!!
| Reviewed By: a-Leng On: October 14, 2003 21:53 CDT|
Style of Writing: 2 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10
Um...there's not much of a plot with this story. It just seems to be focussing on the relationship between Rei and Kai...unfortunately it was a bit boring.
| Reviewed By: Egyptian_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2003 14:46 CDT|
u have got 2 write more!!!! pls pls pls pls pls pls pls!!! oh and if u can make it a lemon!!!!pls pls pls pls pls pls pls sry if i beg but its sooooooooooooooooooooo cute!!!