| "One Fine Summer Day" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | 
| Reviewed By: the tigris  On: March 03, 2004 16:35 CST Comment/Review:
 KAWAIIIIIIIII! that's all I can say, yes I know... see ya ~*~the tigris
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| Reviewed By: Egyptian_lover [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 09, 2003 18:51 CST Comment/Review:
 oh wow this is special...i hope u continue maybe even adda lemon!!!
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| Reviewed By: a-Leng  On: October 14, 2003 21:53 CDT Rating(s):
 Style of Writing: 2 of 10Comment/Review:Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
 Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
 Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
 Overall Rating: 5 of 10
 Um...there's not much of a plot with this story. It just seems to be focussing on the relationship between Rei and Kai...unfortunately it was a bit boring.
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| Reviewed By: Egyptian_lover [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 13, 2003 14:46 CDT Comment/Review:
 u have got 2 write more!!!! pls pls pls pls pls pls pls!!! oh and if u can make it a lemon!!!!pls pls pls pls pls pls pls sry if i beg but its sooooooooooooooooooooo cute!!!
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