| Reviewed By: Jezz On: October 30, 2003 04:07 CST|
Style of Writing: 9 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
This is awesome!!!!! I love Tala, but only when he's a good guy. When he's a bad guy I hate him. I did a story like this but it was amung other story lines. The only thing wrong with this is the Kai/Ray thing. Well, I'm not into yaoi. Everyone is into different stuff so I won't but nothing against ya. Great fic! Do a sequal!