| "A new Family: Ray's 'Innocent' Betrayal" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Kiyomiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 15:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please add on
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Reviewed By: neko-jin On: January 24, 2004 16:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's really very goooood!!!! I luuurrrvveee it!!!! Update soon!!!! Toootles
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Reviewed By: WhiteTiger280 On: January 18, 2004 14:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is by far one of the best fanfics I've ever read!!Having Tyson and Max disappear at the critical stage of the story is a great foreshadowing!!!!!!!!!PLEASE continue!!
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Reviewed By: Shaka On: December 11, 2003 10:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Well this is something new, but hell it's interesting. I hope i can read the next chapters soon.
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Reviewed By: BOF On: October 15, 2003 14:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it so far! So descriptive (anyone that knows me knows that descriptiveness is a huge plus in my book, thanks!) and great idea! Rei having powers, I can fathom it. Him being as calm as he is, his mind could be capable of it. Can't wait to see what happens next! Where's Max and Tyson? 10
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