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"Betrayel of a different kind" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ]
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 Title: Dark Angel 101
Reviewed By: Dark Angel 101 [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 12, 2003 21:10 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Really good but for real why didin't u make Yami/ Yugi as good as the other ones. Anyway i dont care as long as u update im happy. OK update PPPPPPLLLLLLLEEEEEEEAAAAASSSSSEEEEEEE i love stories with vamps. and such. PLEASE UPDATE ^_^ *_- HE HE HE
 Reviewed By: FireAngel_Sakura  On: December 07, 2003 13:41 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I always had a thing for vampire hunters and so this story is really good and interesting.Keep up the good work!
 Reviewed By: Egyptian_lover [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 03, 2003 10:06 CST
Comment/Review:
hi! wow this is really good! i enjoy the plot. pls continue
 Reviewed By: Dark Angel 101  On: November 30, 2003 14:21 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really like this fic. very good. PPPPLLLLLEEEEEEAAAAAASSSSSSSEEEEEE UPDATE ASAP i dont want Yami to be sad he's so cute. Anyway please update, PLEASE ^_^ *_-
 Title: ....
Reviewed By: ~Samara Morgan~  On: November 10, 2003 20:56 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love vampy fics. Have you read the Anne Rice books? Whenever i read them, i kinda switch those charrys with the Yugioh charrys. Its perty kool actually. Good ideas for fics. Any way, i love this fic, so plz write the next chapter!For Yami's sake!
 Reviewed By: Flying Trinket  On: November 03, 2003 02:24 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
^_^ Kewl. Now let's hope you update this!! And BTW, your fic has a nice, lemony flavour! Just try not to go overboard, k? I wanna be able to read all of this without... well ya know... And there were some parts I really liked, like the bit with the BMW shining 'in all its glory' Heh. Also I've noticed you like to dress the guys in leather. O.o* And its kinda weird with you lusting after them in the middle of the fanfic. Only I will decide if Kaiba was sexy or not!!! BTW its great how your description is really cool in the places where it counts. (Do I REALLY care what the room looks like?) You certainly have come a long way since the days of "He can see things really really far" Anyway, this is kinda random, but I really like your fanfic and hope you continue with it. Even if it is just Yami and Yugi.... I want more Ryou. And maybe in your next story you can put Malik. He's pretty cool.
 Reviewed By: Dark Selene  On: October 31, 2003 13:17 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Here's where I ask for some YY/Y.... I'M WAITIN!!!!!!!!!! (not so patiently but i am) UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDAT E!UPDATE!UPDATE!
 Reviewed By: Saiyan_Kitsune_Foxfire [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 24, 2003 22:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great chapter, please update soon.~SKF
 Reviewed By: Bobble [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 23, 2003 19:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
You saved the Yami/Yugi pairing for last on purpose didn't you? hehe.... They are so cute! Please update sooon!
 Reviewed By: Dark Selene  On: October 23, 2003 15:58 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
***sighs*** The things I do to keep Yami happy!**hugs Yami** Nah! I liked the fic a lot and I REALLY wanna see some YY/Y (they r so cute! n_n) wonder what special ability does Yuugi have???
 Reviewed By: Saiyan_Kitsune_Foxfire [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 15, 2003 07:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is a really great fic. Please update soon.
 Reviewed By: Zinx  On: October 14, 2003 23:20 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Love your story please keep on writing . If you like I reviwe could everytime you update if you don't want me to just tell me next time you write . Parrings are great , cool plot just please keep on writing I read to many stories wrote by BAKAS who would never up date.
 Reviewed By: Zinx  On: October 14, 2003 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Love your story please keep on writing . If you like I could everytime you update if you don't want me to just tell me next time you write . Parrings are great , cool plot just please keep on writing I read to many stories wrote by BAKAS who would never up date.
 Reviewed By: alostblackcat [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 14, 2003 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
ohhhhhhhh i love vampire fics!!!! please make the next chappy seto and jou, i love thoses two together, they're so cute!!!! update soon!!!!
 Reviewed By: Egyptian_lover [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 14, 2003 14:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey this is turning out really good! i'm glad 2 see theres a nother vampire and yugioh fan out there!! i am writting 1 2! go check it out if u want! it's called A Forbbiden Love by me of course! oh and keep up the good work! ttyl
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