| "Betrayel of a different kind" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Reviewed By: ShadowRealm [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2008 03:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Love the story. What happened to Bakura? Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: hikari_enzeru On: November 27, 2004 20:45 CST
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OHH! 'damn' that is good! i LOOOOOOOOOOOVE it pleasepleaseeeeeeee right more soon! it's GREAT!. Boy you better hurry with the next chap! ^_^
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Title: Don’t worry, people should come back to review you if you keep updating . . .
Reviewed By: HappyDragon(logged out) On: November 25, 2004 16:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I put you on my favorites in August, glad to see it paid off. Just a question, have you read any of the fics bySweetdeily? I'm thinking of her Y/Y Vamp fics . . . Anyway, I'm liking this story, but you might want to carve out some time to someday go back and reread what you have, and smooth out some of the inconcistanies. Spell it Yuuji, Yuugi, Yuji, or Yugi, whatever works (just know that it Really IS Yugi, as the Japanese do have both a J and a G sound) but maybe try to keep it concistant thrgouhout an entire chapter. Other then the slight gramatical stuff, and the small overuse of exclamation points, I'm thinking that this is a very solid fic. I loved the R/B kiss, the S/J couch bit, and the Y/Y foreshadowing. When your friends say you make your fics too hentai. . . that a bad or a good thing? Because I say 'the hell with it!' Up the rateing to NC-17 and put in some lemony goodness (or lime, if you don't think you could write lemons)! Well enough of my pointless rambelings, just know that there is still one person out there reading ths. Good luck writing!
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Reviewed By: Sable Sapphire On: August 12, 2004 10:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it. Please continue. I'd love to read more.
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Title: I LOVE IT
Reviewed By: Tayko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 08:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tayko:Hey I love it!! it´s great keep it up!! and update ASAP!!! please!! this story is altready in my favorite list^_~ Yami Tayko: YEAH it cool ^_^ Kiss Tayko and Yami Tayko
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Reviewed By: Med On: April 22, 2004 03:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This gets better and better every rtime u write some more! Anyways keep updating ^.^
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 21:03 CDT
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I love it! Yay, Bakura/Ryou!
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Reviewed By: Med On: April 19, 2004 19:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a good fic please write some more soon!
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 13:25 CDT
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I LOVE IT! Yay Ryou/Bakura! Yay! please update soon for me!
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Reviewed By: mystieka On: April 01, 2004 15:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love how you write, but how can i keep liking it if you wont write more -xxx-
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Reviewed By: mystieka On: March 08, 2004 10:46 CST
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hai me again i cant help it i yust love the chappy about Ryou and Bakura is so, so, i dont no wat it is, but stil i looooooooooooooooooooove it and i wand you to write more pleas ^-^ -xxx-
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Reviewed By: mystieka On: March 03, 2004 13:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i lllllloooooooooooovvvvvvveeeeeeeee your writing pleas and i mean pleaeaeaeaeaeaeaes write mooooooooooooooooore ^-^
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Reviewed By: Lord_Ricky On: February 01, 2004 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please review for it is still quite interesting to me and I want to see where you plan to go with your story.
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Reviewed By: technical dragon On: January 26, 2004 20:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what do they say? update!!!
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Reviewed By: Samantha J.C On: January 19, 2004 01:18 CST
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I love you story! and no I don't think it's to hentie. Oh and about you question on wether or ot vampires can get drunk I think they can....if they drink the blood from an extremly drunk human.... heheh oh and her is a sugestion: what what if Yami, Bakura, and Seto or just one of them, becomes freinds with a vampire only they do not know this person is a vampire? I'm thinking it should be a girl and theymeet her at school. Hope ya continue this fic its realy good!
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