Title: Good start
Reviewed By: Lord_Raa [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 04:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
It started out ok, but the last chapter spoilt it. It went from a well thought out plan to remove the competition to something silly. Had you put humour as one of the genres then it would have been ok. Yes we had mail order mecha in the original manga, but it was not needed here, unless this whole episode is going to be written off as a dream. If that is the case, I personally would have waited until it had been completed and posted it as a one-shot. I hope this has been some help for any future chapters.
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