| "Starting Again" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: bloody_black_valentine [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 21:43 CST
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o yeah & u hope u add more on, or write more fics, *runs around screaming* "AHHHHHHHHH O MY GOD IM TURNING IN2 SHUICHI, DAMMNIT SOMEBODY HELP HELPS ME!!!!!!!!!!!" O.O lol
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Reviewed By: bloody_black_valentine [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 21:35 CST
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW, um *bluses* sry, :$ i can't help it was so so so so so so so so so so so cute! ^^ & u killed Ayaka, o thnak you thank you thank you. ...... im evil WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH X'( lol, it was rrrrrreeeeaaaaallllllllyyyyyyy ggggooooooooddddd o dear god im turning in2 Shuichi o.O
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Reviewed By: T On: October 18, 2003 06:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KAWAII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And you killed off Ayaka, what more could we ask for. Great fic! I hope you continue to write. Ja ne
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
This story was all good. I liked it very much and thought it was so cute. Its kinda sad that you killed off Ayaka. (Does no one like her?) Only thing that seemed wrong was nethier Eiri's nor Shuichi's family was there. Whats the matter? Don't they approve? Good otherwise.
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