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Reviewed By: ang3lic_pl4ya [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2004 17:08 CST
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juss kidding... not done my other message yet pressed the enter button by mistake... I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!
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Reviewed By: ang3lic_pl4ya [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2004 17:07 CST
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WOAH DUDE!!! NOT EVEN!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU MADE KAG THINK THAT SESS IS HER ... HER..PRINCE!!
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Reviewed By: Kensh1n81 On: February 18, 2004 04:32 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall i think it was a good fic, but i really think you should have Inu and Sess, talk their things out...i mean...its not to often Sess is reasonable in any fic..heh...but i think i would make the story a lil less fake..i mean im sure Inu's ans Sess' mom would like to see Sess again...atleast thats wat i think. Anyways, Nice story.
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Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2004 01:41 CST
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and so it comes to an end like everything must. good chap, and it makes a fairly complete feeling, but i have one suggestion. try to show where inuyasha and kagome are standing and looking in the last part. although it is a good ending the way it is, i think it might be just a bit better if they were 'staring into each other's eyes in such a way that made it seem as though their souls were twining around one another', or something like that. I thank the for this most excellent finish, i can barely remember what happens in half of this fic, but i get this faint sense of a complete story. an epilogue should only be added if you believe it a necessary addition to this fic. hope you have fun and congrats on the completion of this fic.
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Title: aw!!!
Reviewed By: Shippo Gene [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 19:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw! how fluffy! I loved it! it was a good ending. that whole twist with Sesshy getting the jewel was really good thinking. great job! i loved it!
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Reviewed By: Setsuna-chan On: February 15, 2004 19:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok so I finished reading it and it was AMAZING!!!
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Reviewed By: zuppy70 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 13:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww i loved that ending!!! That was so sweet!!!! ^_^ Your story was really good! I hope you write more storys soon!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: InuGirlTeen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 11:44 CST
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Great story! I loved it! Bravo! *claps loudly*
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Reviewed By: Setsuna-chan On: February 14, 2004 18:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness I've only read the first two chapters and I'm crying there are tears literally running down my cheeks. It takes a talented writer to make someone cry like that.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha nsi On: February 14, 2004 18:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u are really too cruel for your own good. i love this fic it is really emotional. i don't understand how kagome can be so strong, but that is her character, so update
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Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2004 05:24 CST
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personally i think that there is more drama than sap in this chap since there is more thinking going on...i think. eh, howevery you wish to look at it, i believe its a good chapter, although i feel very sorry that kagome was mistaken, and that i happened to be wrong in my guess...but oh well.If you do update on valentines, then i'm sure that i could give you the invisible trophy for one of the fastest updates ever. have fun and good luck with the rest.
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Reviewed By: Dragonstar03 On: January 24, 2004 01:36 CST
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update soon
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Title: PLZPLZPLZ!
Reviewed By: Chib On: January 17, 2004 16:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! This is ChiB once again! (everyone miss moi?!(A)) hehehe.. anywayz.. SO! when are ya gonna update?! :D cuz i can HARDLY and i mean HARDLY waIT!!!!!! :D:D like i soooo wanan read wutz gonna happen next! YiPPY! so so ! ppl PLZPLZ review this lovely author's WONDERFUL 100% beautiful stori! Alrighty?! now i g2g wel.. so ppl review and plzplz dearest aurthor.. update! ;) ^-^ JA-NAE MINA-SAN!(EVERYONE) -loves ur stori like hell! :P-
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Title: great story!!!!
Reviewed By: chib On: January 11, 2004 09:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOWY! great story!!!! omg i loved it like hell!!!!!(heaven:P) it was soo sad, and i want to see sad(inu/kag) more! hehe i like to cry a bit.. well plz dont make anyone die or ne thing, and plz update sooner cuz im dyin to read MORE!:D it rocks uh huh~!~! and um..i want inu and kag scenes more (hehe..plz?) and i think they should get along together! :D plz plz update!! *luved ur story (again)!*ja~(bye)
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Reviewed By: TXKitty On: January 10, 2004 20:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the story was great, so please, please, please update soon. i can't wait to find out what happens oh ya, thanx for not leaving the story as a cliffy
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