| "Past Midnight" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Sai_Saishi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2006 06:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
aww ^-^ nicely described, and the most randomely effective display of telling a situation from... well, sort of the 2nd person.... that I've seen in a long while ^-^ nicely written, it flowed smoothly. ^-^ There was ... I think.... one typo.... the word steam is missing an s somewhere in there ^^; over all, I enjoyed reading this *-^
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Reviewed By: youngersister On: November 01, 2004 13:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Weite more pleeeeeeeeeeeeeae I love your stories (even though this is only my second one) you are a great writter and I don't know if you heard of this site but you might get a lot of reveiws from it if you decied to post a story on there it is called fanfiction.net
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 13:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
AWWWWW!!!!!!!!!! How sweet!!! **giggles** You are such a talented writer.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: October 16, 2003 22:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was sweet I hope Duo gets better... you should a 1x2x5 I bet you'd be good at it...TTFN
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Reviewed By: Danes With Fyre [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2003 20:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awww. That was so cute. And having a cold is no fun. *goes in corner and coughs* Write more! I like your stories!! ^_^
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