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Reviewed By: Gepoli On: August 31, 2008 09:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful fanfic! This was one of your best! & one of the best I've ever read!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2007 14:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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wonderful story... really enjoyed reading it... good job... great work...
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 12:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
love it. original
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Title: THAT'S IT!?!?!?
Reviewed By: kaye_kay28 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2006 15:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU ENDED IT AT THAT?!?!?!?!? UCK!!! BUT WHYYY?!?!? I FEEL LIKE THERE NEEDED TO BE ONE MORE CHAPTER. ::SIGHS:: OH WELL. . . SHIPPOU WAS PRETTY COURAGEOUS IN THIS FIC THOUGH. IT WAS SO KEWL! I THINK TAT ONE WAS MY FAVORITE CHAPTER, W/ SHIPPOU TO THE RESCUE. HEE HEE. o__O;
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Reviewed By: mirrorhanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2006 23:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are really creative and use colorful descriptive words that paint a picture in the readers mind. The only problem is, you need to work on your spelling and grammer, as a fellow fanfic author( though I've thus far only written one fic) I know what bad grammer can do to bring down a story, so just run things through spellcheck and revise for grammer and your fine. Trust me, I don't spell well myself and sometimes my grammer is afflicted by my horrible typing skills so it's not a huge thing to me but to some peolpe it is very aggrivating. Also if you would like to read my fanfic( some authors like to review others work for inspiration ect.) The title is Nightmares and my name is Mirrorhanyou. So to sum it all up, I enjoyed your story and hope you will read mine and review. sincerly, Mirrorhanyou:)
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Reviewed By: ArtemisMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2005 18:23 CST
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This was a cute story! ^_^ It was a bit rough, but it's also one of your eariler ones so I'm sure you've improved since then. But I really did enjoy reading it and just getting a good dose of some action and cuteness (I was so caught up in the part with Shippo near the end that I read past the end of my lunch break, LOL). I'll have to check out some of your more recent work now...
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Title: Special Notice* * * *
Reviewed By: Rumiko Takahashi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, you never stop to amaze me. I love your stories. Plus it seems that you know my friend Squeakyinuears from Fanfiction.net. If she's also reviewing that would mean you have great taste in detail and creative ideas. Since, she only reads and reviews the ones that she thinks is great in her opinion. So, keep up the great work. Plus I might think of having my grandmother make a movie of one of your stories. Keep writing. Later.
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Reviewed By: ang3lic_pl4ya(not logged on) On: April 24, 2004 14:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE YOUR FIC!!! i love all your other fics too! [the ones i read]
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Title: this wuz fabulous!
Reviewed By: lilsweeteekitty On: January 13, 2004 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a vry original fic......!!!!!!!!!! great job....keep up the good wrk!!!!!!
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Title: great!!
Reviewed By: brat2princess On: January 09, 2004 19:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg i loved this fic it was great!!!!!!
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Title: *sniff*
Reviewed By: erinlin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2004 15:45 CST
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It's over. *sad face* the last chapter tied everything together perfectly, though. the flashbacks were pure genius! maby you're next fic could be Sessy and Rin, and how there relationship worked out? 'casue that was so original. keep writing (something else) *high five*
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Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2004 17:24 CST
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That will do for an end, That last chapter just seemed to leave off without giving a true ending like this one did. although, I just have this natural curiosity of what happened to Hojo's men. I can imagine some stuff that might have happened, but I was just curious what you might choose to do to them. oh well, this end the story well enough. have fun and good luck with any future endeavors.
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 19:39 CST
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^_^ i think that for the first time i actually don't feel like totaly obliterating Kikyo. i mean i'm made at her and i will always hate her but for the first time it didn't feel like she was the compleat instagatior of the whole thing and really there along for the ride because she simply looked like Kag. wow. congradualtions. you have somewhat calmed my blood lust. ^_^ thanks for the epologue. up date your other stories please and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: chihiro-san (too lazy to log in) On: January 04, 2004 13:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Thank you for the epiloug; it was an unnecissary (yet not unwelcomed) surprise! It was just as well written as the rest of your story. I must say that the fanfic ended at a good time, but isn't it hard to end them? I have such a hard time drawing mine to a close, because I wish that they would go on forever (and I wish I had enough writing talent to continue them forever!). Well, that's all I wish to say. Now I must be off to dispose of the puppy in my lap who's life goal it is to interrupt my typing and to breathe in my face. Ulk. Her breath smells like fermented chum. *shudder*
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Reviewed By: deamon girl 101 On: January 01, 2004 00:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more about this fanfic
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