| "full demon, bad omen" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: Morly On: May 03, 2004 18:56 CDT
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I really enjoyed the other chapters, I just didn't follow this one too much. I think sentences were cut off and words not completely spelt out. But I can't wait to check out the other chapters.
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_For_Ever not logged in On: May 01, 2004 18:45 CDT
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Cool......
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Title: More!
Reviewed By: Miko_Houshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please hurry with the rest of the story!!! And inuyasha a full demon *swoon*....
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Reviewed By: Miko_Houshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 17:58 CST
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Title: Names
Reviewed By: inuyasha666 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 17:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
About the mames of the pups...well I have two names for you. (They are girl names.) Kami and Yami you don't have to use them if you don't want to! I think Kami means god, but I might be wrong. I'm not sure if Yami means anything. (Great fanfic!)
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Title: chappter 1
Reviewed By: inuyasha666 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 16:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You hate Kikyo...WOW I DO TO. I hate her so much that I once had a dream that I stabbed a knife through her haert. It was the best dream I ever had!!!^^
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 16:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update this soon!
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: K005 On: November 28, 2003 03:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The storry is awsome update soon real soon
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Title: im not signed in
Reviewed By: inukitsunemiko*not signed in* On: November 13, 2003 18:10 CST
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*holdes up yoyo* uuuuuuuuppppdddatttttteeee....uuuuuupppppppdddddaaaaatttteeee...
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Title: whyed you stop?!!
Reviewed By: princessann On: November 03, 2003 22:27 CST
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please conyinue ill be waiting and e-mail me at acyoung28@hotmaiil.com when you do see ya then!!
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2003 17:39 CST
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wow kule please write more!!!
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Reviewed By: tigereyzgurl On: October 28, 2003 14:08 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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Hey, I think this was good and all, but you should REALLY touch up on your grammar and spelling. Spelling is like my pet peeve. If you want to have your fanfics revised, just ask someone here to do it. I'd gladly revise them for you! :) But besides that, I like the way it has begun. I can already tell it's going to have a juicy plot :-D
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Title: good story
Reviewed By: Katina108 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2003 21:03 CST
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it's a good story, and I find it extremely interesting, but perhaps you need to seperate it a bit. It's a little difficult to read right now. perhaps a space between the quotation marks and the next word would help a lot, and perhaps put the different people talking on new lines.. or something like that. But the story is interesting, and I can't wait to see what happens next
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Title: thankx...
Reviewed By: ashia timory sakue(spelt that wrong in the chapter) [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2003 18:52 CST
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i am realy thankfull for that you guys....but you havent even read it yet so...ill be waiting to be told how stupid i am verry soon...
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Reviewed By: Milady On: October 27, 2003 15:38 CST
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u got 2 write this fic...
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