| "Of Light and Dark" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Kuroneko13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 21:13 CDT
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*crys* where are you?!?!?! You are going to make me cry more if you don't update soon!!! please up date
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Title: spelling
Reviewed By: some1 On: June 20, 2004 14:12 CDT
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you spelled half demon wrong its soppoused to be hanyou you spelled it hanyo and why dont you put a sango and miroku pairing. and also this story is great and update soon
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Reviewed By: Kuroneko13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 21:14 CDT
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come on i really like this fic and you aren't updating. why? if you don't update soon *pulls out rope,duck tape, and pointy objects* i will kidnap you and force you to write. Mwahahahaha *ducks and dodges objects that are being thrown at me* ok no pointy objects but i will kidnap you if you don't update. so update!!!!!!!!!!1
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Reviewed By: Ali B [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 19:44 CDT
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Hey, this is Ali B. Sorry that I haven't responded sooner, but I haven't been reading my reviews lately (sp?) cause I'm too damn lazy. To answer your first question, I don't think that you should kill anyone! Well, unless it's Kikyo, then it's acceptable (sp?), but otherwise no no. And to answer your second question, I can't really say. I don't like crossovers at all, with very few acceptions. I think that you're a good author, and a lot of people like crossovers, so have at it! I'm sure that you'll do a good job. But really, the only thing about this fic that I didn't like were the OCs. I can't stand them! I dislike original characters more so than crossovers, and that's saying a lot. Anyway, thank you so much for reviewing my fic, and I hope that you found my advice helpful, if not amusing! ^_^ Anytime you want me to read something I'm here! My email in on my profile, so have at it! xoxo Ja ne! ^_^ ~Ali B~
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Reviewed By: etERnaL aBYSs [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 23:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ok let me explain my ratings first... usually when you write an essay, story, etc. you write it in paragrapghs which is easier for the reader and it makes the story look better (in my opinion) when people are chatting or talking you make a new paragragh when someone else says something the spelling and grammar was perfect and i found nothing wrong... at least not that i remember this story is original in it's own way. like other stories it has an oc or a mary sue. which is okay but there are a lot of storie out there that also as oc'c. although the whole concept of the story is breathtaking and funny. i enjoyed this story a lot because there are 2 oc's who are completely opposite but act so well together. also i love how dark acts so tough yet loves her sister to death. now i would like to respond to what this story was originally put up for. also know as the help comumn. you asked for more characters and i wondered if it was still all right to add my character; which would be a girl. so if it's all right with you i'll just e-mail you rith my characters stats. they wil be written similar to those of dark and light. ja ~eternal abyss
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Title: Good fic
Reviewed By: Kuroneko13 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2004 18:38 CST
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i like this fic it is pretty good. these are the pairings i want sess/sai inu/kag kog/luc miro/san nar with no body or with kikyo because i don't like them.you should take Razoru's tip and space out it is very hard to read
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Title: Where?
Reviewed By: Razoru [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2003 21:31 CDT
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Oi! Where is my character? Oh, and one tip.. Space it out!!! I have a hard time reading it!
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