| "Trilogy:Journey to the center of the soul" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Dark Shinigami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 14:06 CST
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Whoa! I almost forgot that I posted this here XX I really have to get updates to this fiction but! if you are looking for more I have them at my other gallery :www.duodarkshinigami.devitantart.com :3
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Reviewed By: Lord Aries Greymon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 05:51 CDT
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Hmm, an old tale eh? I thouroughly enjoyed what I read, though I hope those two morons get killed soon. But it's age begs the question, 'Why have you not updated?' I do hope you can get a new chapter/segment out sometime soon. Or have thou or thine muse met with an untimely end? Sincerely, Lord Aries Greymon
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Title: Waiting for more....
Reviewed By: SlvrTrinity [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 23:15 CDT
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*Hint* *Cough* *Hint, Hint!!* Am....dying....need...more....posts....badly! Won't...make...it.........addicition.....is..... needing....more!!! ((Just a hint....we're still waiting!)) (Grins) I know you're busy...I just had to buge you! *Laughs* ^_~
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Reviewed By: Andi 22 On: April 26, 2004 19:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job so far! I realy like this story...again, something I've never seen before. I'll look forward to updates. I can see that you have a hard time with grammar and spelling. If you'd like, I can beta this for you....my e-mail address is Baileysracingheart@hotmail.com if you're interested.
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Title: Need....More....
Reviewed By: Slvr Trinity On: October 27, 2003 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Must......post....more..... Need.....more...... (Grins) What can I say?? I LOVE IT!!! Can't wait till you post more chapters! And heck, the spelling errors are no biggy...it's nice to have everything spelled correctly but that's not the important factor! ;) Wounderful begining, can't wait to see where it goes! (Smiles)
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Reviewed By: Dark Shinigami [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 18:54 CDT
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Meh no problem God only knows I'm not the best at grammer or spelling..XD. I just thought that I got all the little buggers but it looks like I missed some. Yeah I'm working on a chapter of "From Hell" right now. and I got some new art to it posted on my DJ.
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Reviewed By: Darkwing_Eli [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 16:26 CDT
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*Huggles Gami*. Yeah, I totally loved this beginning! I truly can't wait for more. And I'm madly curios to read "From Hell"! After those drawings of yours, I'm living to read that! LoL! ^^ (I truly hope I didn't offend you if I asked about those oversights, but please, forgive me, because the problem is that, if I can't find a word on the dictionary, I get easily confused. ^.^;;) And happy to see you around! I was a bit worried about you in these days.
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Reviewed By: Dark Shinigami [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 09:22 CDT
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Thanks I'm glad you liked it...^^ I'm working on it and the other fiction (From Hell*Title pending) as we speak..er type. Yeah I know there is some that even spell check missed. I'm going to have to go back and re-edit it again and then re-upload. But I'm glad you liked it all the same.
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Darkwing-Eli On: October 23, 2003 15:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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WOW! I've just finished reading. What a mystic, mysterious, creepy atmosphere here! It is enough to keep you chained to the paper to read! (And you chained to your pc to write...) Duo's simply lovely! And I'm curios to know Sera. She's an interesting character. Her past totally captured my sympathy. And those two jerks? If beating Duo-kun wasn't enough, they also broke that rosary...I can't forgive them. Duo's too good... This means I can take care of them by myself....*Sharpens her modified scythe*. WONDERFUL work, brother. *Slaps Shinigami's back*. I hope you don't loose your muse, because I'd like to see how the story goes. (Thrilling!!!! ^_^) P.S. I don't know if it's me, because you know that English isn't my language, but...I found some typo fairies. But I'm not really sure. So I apologize if I understood wrong. (I know I do tons of mistakes!!!!!! ^_^;;;)
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