| "In the Game of Life" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Reviewed By: Josey On: May 26, 2004 18:40 CDT
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CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please, pretty please?
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Reviewed By: fireash [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 21:54 CDT
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thats fine. like what you added. hmmm so who is the girl? one of his cousins? interesting. thanks for updating.
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Reviewed By: fireash [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 18:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
like the update although it leaves you wanting more. man that idonthaveanickname is kinda harsh. but at least you did update. anyway...still having trouble with the name? i could give you more ideas if you like. can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: dancin_cutie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 17:58 CDT
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this is awsome! but could you please updated more?? i just luv it! can't wait to find out who the stranger is
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Reviewed By: fireash [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 18:47 CDT
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sorry i haven't reviewed lately and couldn't get in touch with you for a name. i moved in january and didn't get internet for 3 months. i am back so i hope you got my email. love it so far. cant wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: idonthaveanickname On: May 01, 2004 17:55 CDT
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you really need to write more, i already know 6 people who have stopped seeing if you have updated
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Reviewed By: idonthaveanickname On: April 21, 2004 15:08 CDT
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You will lose many readers is you update this slow so i suggest you write more
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Reviewed By: Lili 68 On: April 12, 2004 22:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was good it was so sad I can't even stop crying! Oh well can't wait to read the next part of it!
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Reviewed By: idonthaveanickname On: April 12, 2004 11:59 CDT
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if you want more readers you have to update!
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Reviewed By: idonthaveanickname On: April 11, 2004 18:07 CDT
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if you dont update soon you are going to loose many readers
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Reviewed By: iy lvr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 00:11 CDT
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i know its been hard to access my chapters and stuff, so if you would like to see the newest chapter but havent been able to, you can read it at my new site, natalieworld.com, or just visit it for fun. There's not much there yet since i havent had it long, but tell me if you like what's there cuz its my first site and id like opinions.
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Reviewed By: idonthaveanickname On: April 04, 2004 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i absolutly loved it but if you dont write more you wont get many readers. and i would like to find out what happens too
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Reviewed By: Dah88 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 00:59 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plz plz plz oh plz I do like this story because I want to find out who this man is and what going to Kagome? I would like to see if Kagome gets over Inuyasha and see if she moves on to someone new. Plz plz plz update soon.
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Reviewed By: catsrock208 On: March 27, 2004 16:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i dont see why the spelling grammer is needed but i loved it so far now please write more i got to find out what happens all of the other authors take soo long please put me out of my misery!
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Reviewed By: Faye273 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2004 20:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
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-_- I feel like a Guinea Pig *sigh* Need to update soon! And now you get a 7 just cause this chapter didn't answer any of the questions from the last chapter.... so HA
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