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| "Balance" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: Lacy On: August 08, 2004 16:01 CDT
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This is good. This is excellent. This is sad. Please, please, please update soon. You are my favourite author and Balance is my favourite fanfic.
| Reviewed By: Dee Dee On: August 08, 2004 06:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh, so much tension, I can't wait to see what happens. Please make it a happy ending!
| Reviewed By: Pixie Smith (notsignedin) On: August 06, 2004 22:06 CDT
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I just feel so sorry for Hikaru and Touya. My biggest hope is that they make it through the conflict, and you know what they say, tests like these make relationships stronger. I sincerely hope that's what will happen with Hikaru and Touya. I'm very disappointed that no one was able to accept their relationship. I'm really sad that at this moment in time when Hikaru and Touya need it most everyone has abandoned them. At least Ogata and Ashiwara are okay with it. I'm really disappointed with Waya's reaction because he's supposed to be Hikaru's best friend but I guess that's the real world. Please, please, whatever you do, don't make Hikaru and Touya break up, they deserve some happiness. There's nothing wrong with being gay!
| Reviewed By: Pixie Smith (notsignedin) On: August 06, 2004 22:06 CDT
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I just feel so sorry for Hikaru and Touya. My biggest hope is that they make it through the conflict, and you know what they say, tests like these make relationships stronger. I sincerely hope that's what will happen with Hikaru and Touya. I'm very disappointed that no one was able to accept their relationship. I'm really sad that at this moment in time when Hikaru and Touya need it most everyone has abandoned them. At least Ogata and Ashiwara are okay with it. I'm really disappointed with Waya's reaction because he's supposed to be Hikaru's best friend but I guess that's the real world. Please, please, whatever you do, don't make Hikaru and Touya break up, they deserve some happiness. There's nothing wrong with being gay!
| Title: Lady moon
Reviewed By: LadyMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 14:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*knules craking* *twitch* Please tell me your going to up date soon right? *evil snerl* I hope you do, cause if you dont.........*big pic of bame going off*
| Reviewed By: kasey_sanada [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 01:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm going to give it to you straight.... I LOVE IT! You are by far one of the best HnoG fanfic writers I've ever come across! I was hoping you would continue this, and I'm so happy you did! I can't wait for the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: Evie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 02:44 CDT
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I love the story, most especially how you keep the feelings balanced between the two main characters. Please update soon, cliffhangers drive me mad.
| Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 23:56 CDT
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Hm... I've just realised that with both of my reviews, every time I used a certain symbol, mediaminer took out my sentences so that it no longer makes sense. In the first review, the first time you see this symbol ">" it was supposed to be this: //but one certainly couldn't deny that the Japanese insei program had been rather anemic in numbers in recent years//. *** In my second review, when you again see this symbol ">" it was supposed to say this: //This one is even worse. He doesn't even have a prop to play with. He just sits there trying to look like someone you wouldn't want to meet in a dark alley. But with that ugly purple suit and that ridiculous Prince Valiant hair? Puh-leez.// Hope that clears things up otherwise it just looks like I'm laughing at Hikaru's sad situation which is definitely not what I want!
| Title: Review Part Two
Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 23:45 CDT
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(continued) ...Truly amazing writing talent. Do you know, before everything was exposed, I had a feeling that the reporter would see something he shouldn't see. The situation was too perfect. Why are reporters always so nosy? Sure, they get their perfect story, make their big break, but they never think about the lives they destroy in the process. It made me want to cry how Hikaru's mum was so insensitive. I didn't expect everything to go smoothly, but I'd at least hoped his family would be supportive. Thinking about it though, even in the anime Hikaru's mum is a bit of a ditz, she never really cared about what her son did. Oh damn, everyone must be thinking that Go players are all gay now! The fallout from the picture is going to be like fallout from a nuclear bomb! Please, please do not make Waya and Isumi as insensitive as Hikaru's mother. I think that at this moment in time Hikaru really needs some supportive figures. Why don't you surprise us and make Touya's parents supportive! Maybe after this Hikaru's mum will turn around and be supportive too. Am I just dreaming? I love everything to be a bed of roses. Although roses DO have thorns. Let's see what you can do, can't wait for an update. You sure updated really, really quickly last time. Do it again!!! =)
| Title: Review Part One
Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 23:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another update! You're probably sick of me by now but… I'll write you another review anyway! *Grins*. I really like it how Hikaru is willing to do the magazine article because of Sai, I don't want Sai to ever be forgotten. I adored him in the anime and I want his legacy to live on forever. Yes, Hikaru does have a duty to Go and to Sai and I know with his endless enthusiasm he won't let its dignity be compromised. Although now that everyone knows he's gay, some people may say that he's already compromised it. *Sniff.* How sad, how truly sad that there will always be people in the world who think like that. Ha, ha, I just read the line where Hikaru was applying wasabi a *bit* too liberally onto his sushi and Touya was imagining that acid-burning-mouth on other parts of him. Actually, to tell you the truth, that would definitely make for a very funny lemon scene. Poor Occhi and what was the other guy's name? I remember their faces but can't remember the second guy's name. Imagine being described like that! Giggles. The other Shindou? As in the Shindou from Gravitation?!? Tee, hee, hee. I like that! Maybe do a cameo appearance later on? Please! He's gay too right? Maybe that will make people more accepting of homosexuality. > Oh my god! Words cannot describe how much I was laughing when I read this. Honestly!!! Imagine this scene, me with my hand over my mouth struggling not to gwaff too loudly and desperately sucking lungfuls of air in. You really do have writing talent | Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 22:58 CDT
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(continued) ...tears from eyes, that line is a classic! It was so cute how Hikaru researched sex, tee, hee, hee, I could just imagine that scene in my minds eye. I was cringing the whole way through afraid that he'd be caught, though that would have been funny. The lemon scene was hot, hot, HOT!!! I'm still blushing and waving my hands in front of my face to cool down. You always write absolutely delicious lemon scenes. I wanted to deck the 'Cookbook of Sex' too (cute name by the way). I spent the time thinking, speed up, yes, speed up, I could practically feel the torture poor Akira was going through. Poor, poor frustrated Akira. I loved it how he thought it was a choreograph of what he imagined a porno flick would be like, LOL. I really hope that when the tournament starts the two don't get all angry at each other. I hope they can keep the two aspect of their lives neatly compartmentalised and be happy in their relationship. But we'll see I suppose. Please update soon!
| Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 22:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness, I actually thought that you'd finished this story so imagine my surprise (read: EXTREME HAPPINESS) when I checked and discovered that you'd just updated and added another chapter. To ensure that I get to read the next chapter as soon as you update I've added you to my favourite author's list - Yay! I only entered this fandom about a month ago, and ever since I've been searching for Hikaru/Akira fics. There really aren't all that many Hikaru no Go fics out there so I'm glad you're still writing. You are definitely one my favourite Hikaru no Go writers. You write well mixing humour with serious situations and the best thing about your writing is that you manage to keep them in character too. I also like the pacing of your story. Some writers write Hikaru and Akira terribly out of character and do the whole, oh-my-God-I-love-you-so-now-let's-jump-into-bed thing, which is really distracting. Then again, who am I to complain, I couldn't write a Hikaru no Go fic to save my life! I should actually be reviewing all of those dodgy stories to congratulate the authors for even managing to write Hikaru/Akira fics. Anyway, back to the matter on hand, this chapter is as brilliant as your other chapters! I've been reading and rereading it again and again. Promoting Touya and Hikaru as Go Idols! I was rolling around on the ground laughing when I read that, it's a brilliant idea for a fic, I really can't wait to see where you're going to go with it! > Chuckles and wipes tea | Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 18:07 CDT
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I adore all of your fics! This one is no exception. I absolutely loved it how they slowly got together and you didn't rush the lemon. Cute how they didn't really know what they were doing. Brilliant work!
| Reviewed By: yukiko07 On: April 23, 2004 14:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story (not just for the smut mind you) but for the fact that they are growing in this story and i really would like to see how they would sort out all the problems that they will surely find. GREAT JOB!!!
| Reviewed By: fireash [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww no one reviewed. i thought it was a really good story. i liked the lemons too. i am new to the hikaru no go fics but this one is good. thanks for sharing.
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