| "Lost Innocence" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: cutie_kirara_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 23:18 CDT
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hurry the story please
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Title: update
Reviewed By: ilovexoxox (not signed on yet) On: March 19, 2004 21:30 CST
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this is a really cool story so please update!!
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Title: i loved it even thought its kinda sad
Reviewed By: Gale89 On: January 14, 2004 20:00 CST
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OMG its so sad and i just got over my fit of tears to. well i just wrote a poem and i think it fits this part of the book (ch.8) perfectly so if u dont mind ill write it down. Forvere..... Let the rain fall down and call my name. Let the sunshine fall and come again. Cause I'm still crying for you. I'm still crying over you. You left me there so unaware of what was happening to me. You left this world for me. Thought you said you'd alwas be ther. You left this world for me. Though I still remeber the times we shared. You gave your life to trade for mine. I wish you were here all the time. I miss you so much. I miss your soud your smell and your touch. I wanna here your voice again and not just in the rain. I wanna feel your hands again and not this dreadful pain. I want you to be with me. But that place is not for me. So I'll keep on walken head up proud. I'll ust keep on walken and when I look up at the clouds. I know you'll alwas be with me. Together we will alwas be. Just you and me.... FOREVER Junella H. its realy bout a gurl who is saved by here boyfriend and in the proses of saveing her he loses his life so it dosent egxactly fit but its sad so it is similar. (please dont use this or claim it for yours. not that im empling u would or anything just please dont) just incase u are wondering Junella is my real name i just alwas use gale89 for my reviews because my dad tells me i sing like a nightingale so sicne its so long to type i just type gale and 89 is my fav numder i dont know why tough ohh well. Gale89
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Reviewed By: Inu+ Kag = Eternity On: December 23, 2003 11:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I love your fanfic please write more and soon please I am running out of Inuyasha fanfics to read. Out of all of the fanfics that I have read I think that yours is the best. Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: belldandy_luver [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 14:52 CST
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can u not make kikyo appear and make inu yasha betray kagome. if u can do that then this story is going straight to my favorites page
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Reviewed By: meera [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2003 07:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what?? DEAD??? wait... i thought suzana didn't really care about her mom... but having a person die that LIVED with u... *shudder*
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Reviewed By: INU ROX On: December 13, 2003 20:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
as I completely disagree with Koga hitting Kagome...I think this is a REALLY good story! so wrire more!
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Reviewed By: IWantMoreIY On: December 10, 2003 01:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more! It's all goof and original! PLEASE write more! I have been combing this website for good, no great stuff and I hate it when absolutely excellent writers like you haven't finished a Grade A 1 top-of-the-line work like this. I didn't want to do this, but *starts swinging warcg back and forth, chanting* "you will write more, you will write more, you will write more,,,"
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Reviewed By: Fallin Dark Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 18:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it *gets serios sending death glare* You WILL wright more you WILL continue soon you WILL explain the whole Sesshomore thing *gives sparkly puppy dog eyes Right
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: December 06, 2003 17:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Soo sad, but it seem to be getting happier! Keep going! Adios!
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Reviewed By: Jaenelle Angeline [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 14:54 CST
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pleeeeeeease update soooooon i cant wait for the next chap
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: November 09, 2003 20:26 CST
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Don't let Kouga hit Kagome! Cliffies are evil! Keep writing!
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