| "It's the Thought that Counts" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: WOOT!
Reviewed By: treaammo On: October 14, 2007 03:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ruki never ceases to make ne laugh. You did an excellent job in capturing her wit and wicked sarcasim. Hirokaxu's comments are exactly the sort of thing I could imagine him saying too. Capturing predesigned charactorization that easily is really a gift. Jen and Takato would make quite the pair, and the way you expressed the embaressment factor of revealing such feelings is truely poetic. Somehow reading about nervous confessions really make my heart skip a few beats, though real life situations are a completely different matter. Overall great job! A joy to read.
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Reviewed By: Sabriel-chan On: November 30, 2003 04:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have never read a fic with this paring so I didn't know what to expect. It ended up being very good and the ending was just so sweet!
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Reviewed By: KindDarkHope [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2003 22:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this Fic. Usually one person admits there love and boom there in an intimate relationship. I like how you kept it down to earth.
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