| "Of passion and beer" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Yoko Oro [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 13:58 CST
Comment/Review:
Demonic Angel can go to Hell. Okay, that was pretty redundant condemming someone named Demonic Angel to Hell...but anyway, if you are going to criticize, please put in the pro's as well as the cons! Geez, people! Pro: This ficcie was really funny. Con: It was also kind of gross...
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Reviewed By: Demonic_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
Your spelling and grammar are in desprate need of work. Ask a friend that is skilled in English to help you refine your stories.
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Title: Abe
Reviewed By: kuroi kaze On: April 17, 2004 02:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You weren't All that original I have read stories like this before but I still liked it. Oh and if you're in college why didn't you realize that it was George Washington who said "I can not tell a lie" just wanted to get your facts straight. Keep on writing.
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2004 18:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hah not bad
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Reviewed By: Inu_Yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2004 13:16 CST
Comment/Review:
i like this fic. the end was really funny, have you ever played truth or dare
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Title: rin-no-nii-chan
Reviewed By: tbpeppy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2004 10:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I knew the unision poeple would come in somewhere. Now I know why I shouldn't read this in school....... Inu says hi. He heard I was reading your story and since it's one of his favorites he came to read over my shoulder. He says he'll meet you after school (We all got a good idea why...) ~~Tbpeppy~~
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Reviewed By: Macy Gray On: November 06, 2003 18:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I know I liked this. Very cool and sexy. ^_~
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