| "Spirit of Kings" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: SO SHORT
Reviewed By: alexus-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 20:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLZ write more its very well thought over and writen even if ranma seems a little super powered, not unbeatable, well ranma always was unbeaten, but your shown the lack of ablosute power ranma has even if he is now like 5000x more powerful than the oringal lol. course you powered him up mainly by his attuide and smarts which may be alittle over the top but you gave a reason for it which is good. in a way you made a non-mary-sue mary-sue, in the way that he 'could' beat anyone given enough time and knowlegth of his oppenent. this is also mainly due to the fact your got him foucsing mostly on the amount and control of his chi, and knowlengh (damn spelling sorry) which equals power. anyway GOOD STORY, WRITE MORE PLZ.
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Reviewed By: Silverscale On: March 02, 2005 04:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You got to update this story is too good to be put on hold!
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Title: Spirit of Kings
Reviewed By: Jedi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 13:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can't wait for more,please update as soon as possible
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Reviewed By: annette On: May 30, 2004 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I ENJOYED YOUR FANFIC IT SHOWED CREATIVITY AND STYLE I HOPE THERE WILL BE FURTHER INSTALLMENTS
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Reviewed By: athenais [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 14:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
yes, please update. that storyplot i have don't seeing this often. okay there is something like that at bast adventures, but only in the beginning. i like yours a lot more at this point. it would be a shame if don't continue this one.
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Reviewed By: dark rhapsody On: January 26, 2004 17:45 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm sooooooo sorry! I'm totally stupid. I was on sleepy mode that day (was totally ****** up). Your fic is hilarious! Damn, stupid, stupid, stupid *knocks head on wall*, I hope to see more soon. Forgive me! Oh yeah, before I forget...can you cross this with Inuyasha? It's a neat show and is getting popular, might want to add if it's in your plans. Well, ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Unmei no Musume On: January 01, 2004 13:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is going to be very interesting. When is Ranma going to meet Yoh-kun? Hurry up! I want to see the next part.
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Reviewed By: White Fox 612 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2003 23:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a cool fic!! But does Ranma get to fight in the Shaman King tournament?! When does Yoh, Anna, Amidamaru, and Manta get to meet himm and his new spirits?! Can't wait for an update! Email me when you do okay?! Plz! Ja ne! silversaori@yahoo.com
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Title: tetrambs
Reviewed By: Tetrambs [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 19:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
the only reason i gave you a 9 for over all rating is because... odds are your going to do a sailor senshi thing... and that's probably going to bring your fic down a few nauches... unless you find an idea that hasn't been used like the neighborhood bike... everyone's had a ride! But i want to see the next installment, seriously!
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Reviewed By: dark rhapsody On: November 26, 2003 16:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Neato! I've scoured all across the fanfic universe looking for a SK/Ranma fic like yours. Although you're a bit lacking in humor (which I find attractive in a fic) you do make up for it in such vivid detail I almost feel like I'm _living_ in it and action that seems to walk across my screen! I like how you explain everything so I know just how what happened. I have some crazy ideas being cooked up in my head but the first thing that pops into my mind is "How?" BTW, I wish you'd let the (damn) characters meet. And SOON!
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Reviewed By: Ghost Tiger On: November 06, 2003 09:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Iam looing forward to the next chapters keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Gopu On: November 04, 2003 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you continue. It is a great start.
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